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J i g S a w
07-26-2006, 10:17 AM
alright I made this fanfic awhile ago, but im reposting it for new viewers, plus I love the story and the ending is awesome......so when reading the beginning....think carefully of what it means....check it out!!:



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"4, 3, 2, 1.....Game Over"

A sudden slam was heard, echoing throughout the cold and empty room, now coated with a thick layer of blood. Moments later, a louder fall was heard, breaking the short but creepy silence.

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"I can't see! Where am I?! What the fuck is happening?" screamed a peircing voice of a man.

"Welcome. You have been kidnapped, and taken hostage..." said a deep scratchy voice.

"Who the hell are you? WHERE AM I?!" one again yelled the shooken up voice.

"Smile, Fred. Your in no harm right now. Your just in shock. You are in a room, a large wide room with multiple doors..."

"Why can't I see?! I JUST WANT TO FUCKING SEE!"

"Words are precious, Fred. Take off your blindfold, take a look at your surroundings and think about why your here..." continued the mysterious voice.

A blindfold fell to the ground, and Fred's eyes ripped open and he twirled around, seeing some doors numbered 1 to 4.

"What is this? Tell me what this is!!!" screamed Fred at a camera he discovered in the upper right corner of the room.

"This is what you want it to be. The rules are simple--" almost finished the voice, as Fred interuptted...

"Fuck rules man! I want a way out of here! Anyway, Get me out!"

"Ok Fred, here are the rules, follow them or not. All doors lead to safety, but have different ways of getting there.There is one door behind you, with the number 0 on it. Only you possess the key to enter it. The other doors are unlocked and open for you to examine. Make your choice".

Fred stood there, shocked still by what was happening. The camera was watching his every move, every action.

Fred thought for a moment, and finally decided to check the first 4 doors.
He walked to door number 1, and slowly opened it.

Steps led down somewhere, so Fred walked down them to examine it. It was very dark and creepy. He found a light switch on the wall, and flicked it on. Blood flooded the room up to his knees. Fred stumbled backwards in fright, falling into the pool of blood. He scrambled up quickly to the side of the wall and almost started climbing up the stairs when he heard the same deep voice he hear before.

"Hello Fred, nice to see you again.."

Freds head whipped up to the corner of the room and as he shouldve known, saw a camera.

"Fred, I hope the blood didnt give you such a shock. Its just from the others that have tried this way to get out.--"

"AND WHAT IS THAT WAY? god your a sick son of a bitch!!" yelled Fred in anger!

"The meter on the wall releases door number 0. Which leads to safety. As you can see, the meter needs to be filled completely to open the door. You just need to cut your self open, and let your blood reach the top of the meter, precisly youd be up to your nose in your own blood. Make your choice, Fred"

Fred was astonished by the sick ways of survival and a tear fell from his eye.




To Be Continued...

J i g S a w
07-26-2006, 12:30 PM
Sigh...Please dont be a bitch and only view it :rolleyes:

Tehdude
07-26-2006, 12:35 PM
I read this before, i think. it's written well, but one problem.
Ok, the first bunch of people who would try that way out, would ALL die. There's not that much blood in the human body.

J i g S a w
07-26-2006, 12:38 PM
Yeah ive had things said about that. I just want to put it in as a fear factor, showing fred that death is inevitable in life. If he even tryed to cut himself the blood wouldnt reach up that high. Lol, its a fan-fiction, key word fiction. Have some fun, sit back and believe :)

J i g S a w
07-27-2006, 01:25 PM
Fred felt a tear fall from his eye and into the blood.

He stood there for what seemed eternity and stared at the meter and the blood. It was quiet.

Suddenly, he heard something. He looked at the blood and ran upstairs, finally knowing door number 1 wasnt the way he wanted to get out.

He heard the voice again, it was coming from door number 2! His eyes widened as he ran down the stairs of door number 2. This room was even darker then the rest.

"H-h-help me!" whispered a voice somewhere in the room.

"Wh-who are you? What happened?" said Fred.

He got no answer but he knew this other man needed help. The lights flashed on and there eyes clamped shut. Fred opened his eyes and saw the man sitting in the corner. This room was fairly larger then the other one.

"How did you get in here?" said Fred.

"I....I..woke up here, just a minute ago.." said the man

"I woke up here about a half an hour ago, outside of here. Theres 3 other doors and one door that we need a key for...i think." said Fred, enthused about finding someone else to help him.

"Thank god, I thought I was all alone....it was so dark! We need to get out of here!" responded the man.

"Yah, I know but...each door leads to safety...this is the second door so there has to be something down here--" said Fred, but was interrupted by that mysterious voice.

Fred looked in the corners of the room, and finally saw a camera.

"Hello Fred. Chris. I see you've made a bond with each other. Well enjoy it while it lasts.."

Fred looked at Chris confused.

"...In this room, there is a door. The door will open once you find a key that opens it. A key is hidden throughout this whole place. The door will completely lock in 40 minutes. Time is running out, Live or Die make your choice." finished the voice.

"Quick, lets check the other rooms first!" said Fred.

"Yah, find out what the other ways out are and see what we want to choose!" responded Chris

Chris and Fred ran outside of the room and to Door number 3.

They opened the door. Yet this time, the room was fully lit. Relieved they walked down the steps and into the room. Before they could walk further, they saw it. The room was lit on fire. The fire went on for as far as 3 blocks!! The way out was obvious. Run through the fire, 3 blocks, to the door that led out to safety.

Fred and Chris looked at each other, stunned and awe-shocked.



To Be Continued...

HurnMaster
07-27-2006, 06:41 PM
just poppin by Jigsaw to see what the story is about tho i may have read it before tho i can't remeber lol
hope ur well dude ;)
i may try and make a new trap for u guys at some point soon tho i can't count on it like i said before and it didn't happen :rolleyes:
keep up the good work mate

IWantToPlayAGame
07-27-2006, 07:16 PM
kewl veRRRRRRRy kewl

Zandorv1037
07-28-2006, 01:32 PM
nice, man. Also, nice title. It attracted my attention immediatley.

krazyshyt1126
07-28-2006, 01:41 PM
well written


Hurnmaster has the coolest avatar ive ever seen....

sawtrap
07-28-2006, 01:48 PM
I don't have the patience to read all of that.

HurnMaster
07-28-2006, 04:19 PM
Hurnmaster has the coolest avatar ive ever seen....

Thanks for the compliment,
i made it the other day and then added the new "hanging teeth" poster after the twist bit and it just fitted in like it was soppose to be lol

krazyshyt1126
07-28-2006, 04:41 PM
did u make that twist thing urself? because otherwise its not as original as i thought....

i wasnt sure but i originally thought u made that twist gif in photoshop or something? or is that up for download on the SAW III site?

J i g S a w
07-28-2006, 05:24 PM
"First of all, theres no fuckin way im going through that fire!" screamed Chris

"Fuck! Who does this guy think he is? Hes sick!" yelled Fred

"Okay fred, were not going through this fire! We can try Door 4! Come on, its not too late!" said Chris

"Yah, Thats true, lets go!" responded Fred

Fred and Chris left the room and went back up the stairs. Fred had an idea. He told Chris to go check it, and that he was to scared of what he might see. Chris told him it was fine, so he went down alone.

Fred stood there, and leaned against a wall. He thought of something. In door 1, it sayed he had to shed blood to reach the top of the meter. What if he killed Chris? The only companion with him. He thought about it, but then thought....Chris was a nice guy. He went down into door number 4 alone, not knowing what to expect. Fred has bad thoughts about what he could do.

Little did he know, so did Chris.

Chris ran back up the stairs in back to the main room.

"What was down there?" said Fred

"Umm...nothing actually....i think its just a place to look for that key!" Chris. Chris was lieing. There was something down there.

Fred didnt bother go down. He decided to make his choice.




"Hey uhh...Chris, you havnt seen Room 1 have you? Lemme show you!"


To Be Continued...
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EFB
07-28-2006, 06:21 PM
"First of all, theres no fuckin way im going through that fire!" screamed Chris

Blah, blah , blah , etc...
To Be Continued...
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You should put that stuff in a book. Then people that wanted to read a book could buy it.
Steven King and Clive Barker have no worries. Keep at it though eventually youll probably get good at writting.

HurnMaster
07-28-2006, 06:28 PM
yeah i made it in photoshop/imageready using odd saw images