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Vinc360
12-09-2008, 07:56 PM
Well... it's a thread that has to be made every year! Let's see what cool trap ideas you guys have this year :D

sixteenletername
12-09-2008, 08:27 PM
hmmm

I have been playing around with a major trap like the one in Saw III with Jeff. I know it is way to similar to Saw III's main trap outline. But tell me what you think.

You take this guy who hates his life. He hates everyone around him. He can't make decisions. Then he has to go through tests with a bunch of different people who are placed in traps. He can save them or not. However, Jigsaw keeps promising that he will meet the person responsible for all of his sorrow. When he finally makes it to the door were this person is. A tape asks if he can just forget about his sorrow and not worry about it. He goes through the door. When he gets in there, the room is really dark. The door shuts and locks. Hundreds of TV's turn on around him and Billy is on every screen. He tells the guy he should have just forgot his sorrows, but now he will leave him there to rot. The TV goes of, and a light starts to flicker. As we see this man is trapped in a room of mirrors.

bobbylight17
12-09-2008, 08:35 PM
I though this thread already excisted :confused:

Nways for the sake of variety, a death by suffication would be cool

SaveAsISave
12-10-2008, 05:23 AM
hmmm

I have been playing around with a major trap like the one in Saw III with Jeff. I know it is way to similar to Saw III's main trap outline. But tell me what you think.

You take this guy who hates his life. He hates everyone around him. He can't make decisions. Then he has to go through tests with a bunch of different people who are placed in traps. He can save them or not. However, Jigsaw keeps promising that he will meet the person responsible for all of his sorrow. When he finally makes it to the door were this person is. A tape asks if he can just forget about his sorrow and not worry about it. He goes through the door. When he gets in there, the room is really dark. The door shuts and locks. Hundreds of TV's turn on around him and Billy is on every screen. He tells the guy he should have just forgot his sorrows, but now he will leave him there to rot. The TV goes of, and a light starts to flicker. As we see this man is trapped in a room of mirrors.

It's just basically Saw III with slight adjustments. :/

neoanderson9318
12-10-2008, 05:35 AM
This thread already exists....

EDIT: http://board.houseofjigsaw.com/showthread.php?t=16173&highlight=Trap+ideas

neoanderson9318
12-10-2008, 05:37 AM
I though this thread already excisted :confused:

Nways for the sake of variety, a death by suffication would be cool
Yes. Suffocation would be cool.

neoanderson9318
12-10-2008, 05:38 AM
hmmm

I have been playing around with a major trap like the one in Saw III with Jeff. I know it is way to similar to Saw III's main trap outline. But tell me what you think.

You take this guy who hates his life. He hates everyone around him. He can't make decisions. Then he has to go through tests with a bunch of different people who are placed in traps. He can save them or not. However, Jigsaw keeps promising that he will meet the person responsible for all of his sorrow. When he finally makes it to the door were this person is. A tape asks if he can just forget about his sorrow and not worry about it. He goes through the door. When he gets in there, the room is really dark. The door shuts and locks. Hundreds of TV's turn on around him and Billy is on every screen. He tells the guy he should have just forgot his sorrows, but now he will leave him there to rot. The TV goes of, and a light starts to flicker. As we see this man is trapped in a room of mirrors.
That's just like Saw III. Think of how the fans would react if the writers pretty much copied III into another movie....

The Trapmaster
12-10-2008, 08:07 AM
A new style of main game is needed. I mean, each movie had a different style of main game (except for Saw III and Saw IV, although that makes sense because they take place at the same time)

Saw- 2 Person "Mind Puzzle"
Saw II- 8 Person "Individual Salvation/Survival of the Fittest"
Saw III- 1 Person "Pathway (Forgiveness/Revenge)
Saw IV- 1 Person "Pathway" (Extrapolation)
Saw V- 5 Person "Teamwork"
Saw VI- ?????


I would like to see a new style of game, probably with multiple people in it.

tesseract
12-10-2008, 09:57 AM
Tell me to shut up if you like, cos I say this repeatedly (but it's just cos I would love to see it!) - I really really really wanna see it where they have, like, two people who love each other in the same trap. And perhaps only one can survive, or each has to save the other, or even three people and the one being tested has to choose which one to save or both die.

Vinc360
12-10-2008, 11:04 AM
Tell me to shut up if you like, cos I say this repeatedly (but it's just cos I would love to see it!) - I really really really wanna see it where they have, like, two people who love each other in the same trap. And perhaps only one can survive, or each has to save the other, or even three people and the one being tested has to choose which one to save or both die.


^^^^ THIS ^^^^

BunnythesAINT
12-10-2008, 11:20 AM
I've been thinking of this for a while but it's still not 'completed'
I'd like to call it the Smiley Trap (or...Glasgow trap...yeah, maybe that one)
annnywaaay I've made a few situations because I'm not sure what will be better...more realistic....all that.
Anyways there's this person who wakes up in this chair (just a chair with arms) with this fancy contraption sticking from their mouth. There's this piece that holds the mouth open and there's these knives that are infront of said person (much like Cecil's except only one blade on either side, angled, and no fancy press thing on the front that said person has to hit). Attached to person's wrists, are these fancy cuffs that are part of the chair. Well Billy comes on, does his thing, and then we learn (oh noes!) that the fancy cuffs have razor blades on the bottom and top and that veins will be sliced (and in loss of blood) said person will die(I have thought up many things, but this seems the most...reasonable)....well this person doesn't want to die, no sir not today. We also learn that the person is in a gang ( I read somewhere that rival gangs in iforgotwhere(Britain?) would give other gangs of iforgotwhere these smiles to tell them to back the hell off back in god knows when) and that this fellow has to push the blades back (much like cecil....although this wasn't how I originally thought it....I'll fix my other idea and post it later maybe) which will somehow unlock the fancy cuffs and lovely gang fellow goes free....
Well now the timer(mm...1 minute) starts after the tape stops (not sure....I couldn't see him pulling anything so I'm just going to assume Hoffman or whoever found some cool new sensor motion TV) and off he goes. He sits there for a while and waits, thinking, and then realizes that well he's screwed, so he pushes forward (however, I will note that the knives (somehow) goes like all the way into his face. Well he does his thing and (somehow) the cuffs come off and he screams his head off and well...his face gets ripped apart and well....dies of blood loss(much like Mallick's trap, he did not have to go that deep is what I was thinking).

Ehh...I have to work on it, but I'd really like the ending to be that he got out but he gets his face ripped up from screaming or something....I heard that when you scream after you get one of these fancy things you can get your face all ripped up.

That's mine from a bit ago. Idk what the people will say though. =/

Xenites01
12-10-2008, 02:26 PM
Here's a trap...

A man wakes up, strapped to the floor. He is in darkness, only two candles illuminate the room. He feels around, realizing that he is strapped to the floor by the shoulders and ankles. His arms are connected to leather straps, and are on pull-cables (think Neck Tie in V). Next to him, on each side of his torso, are four large saws. The lights fire on as a TV starts playing. Jigsaw informs the man that if he does not retrieve the key in two minutes, the saws will slice him in half in four spots, and that the further he pulls his arms, the closer the saws slide to his body. The saws start as the TV turns off. Above the man is a ring of 50 keys. Only one will unlock the six locks. He reaches up and manages to pull the keys down. A 2:00 timer starts, counting down. He tries each key on his shoulder locks as the saws pull closer to his body. 1:00. He keeps trying until - a lock opens. He throws off the lock, the key still inside. He pulls his arm out, and the saws rip closer to his body. 0:30. He finds the key again and unlocks his other shoulder bind. He reaches and unlocks one of his ankle binds. 0:01. The timer runs out. The cables pull into the floor as the eight saws quickly slice the man into pieces, blood flying onto the walls and ceiling. He looks around and eventually goes limp, dying from blood loss.

Mr. Briggs Inc.
12-10-2008, 07:05 PM
"The hard way" trap, made in conjunction with the theoretical hedonistic runner I came up with in the character ideas thread.

Our character is someone who has ran through life with the sole purpose of seeming to look better than everyone else. Now, long, twisted poles ala "Rex-Morgan-Trap" run from the wall, through his arms (And part of his stomach), and around the room. As an extra challenge, and to stop him from going too fast, there is barbed wire connected to a rolling track device, wrapped around his neck.

In order to survive, mr. runner needs to take his time, pulling the wire noose along the track as he pulls himself off the long length of pole. Once he gets off he needs to think outside the box, and after pulling the wire off, take the initiative to cauterize his wound with flares on the floor (Which he is meant to notice without help) to stop him from bleeding to death.

Big Boss
12-11-2008, 05:15 AM
:eek: Cant anyone survive a trap?

BunnythesAINT
12-11-2008, 11:24 AM
:eek: Cant anyone survive a trap?
Lmao that's no fun.

neoanderson9318
12-12-2008, 07:44 AM
:eek: Cant anyone survive a trap?
No. They can't.










At All....

Juice
12-12-2008, 08:53 AM
Tell me to shut up if you like, cos I say this repeatedly (but it's just cos I would love to see it!) - I really really really wanna see it where they have, like, two people who love each other in the same trap. And perhaps only one can survive, or each has to save the other, or even three people and the one being tested has to choose which one to save or both die.

I really like this idea. I'd love to see this.

danoftheworld
12-12-2008, 10:01 AM
That's mine from a bit ago. Idk what the people will say though. =/
I think your on about the 'Chelsea Smile'? ;)

tesseract
12-12-2008, 12:43 PM
Lmao that's no fun.
Oh I dunno, Amanda breaking into hysterics after she sliced and diced her 'dead cellmate' was pretty fun :D

tesseract
12-12-2008, 01:00 PM
A dark room.

"Hello Bill. The device attached to your mouth is more than just a gag - it will spray concentrated acid directly into the back of your throat if tampered with. So I would advise that you keep it on, at least until you've completed your test and obtained the key to release it safely. Of course, it will prevent you from speaking, and in about 30 seconds' time this could be very painful for you."

A spotlight comes on, revealing a woman on the other side of the room. She is in an upright position, strapped into a device not dissimilar in design to Tim's rack from Saw III.

"As you can see, Bill, your daughter is at a disadvantage here, being locked into a machine by her wrists, ankles and neck. The restraints that hold her in place will release, but only after the device in front of her body has been active for at least 30 seconds. Bill, you helped your daughter to cover up a terrible crime. You could have done the right thing and told the truth, but you betrayed the system because you didn't want to hurt her. Tonight, you will be forced to hurt her - for if the device in front of her is not activated within two minutes, the restraints around her neck will close, strangling her and eventually snapping her spine. Will your daughter live or die, Bill? Make her choice."

He pulls out the earphones through which the message was delivered, gets up and goes over to the device. He can see there's no way to free her, and then a two-minute timer begins to count down. The woman is hysterical, having been told nothing about what's going on. She cries and asks her father to tell her what's happening, but of course he can't speak. He looks at the device in front of her - it's a blow torch. He grabs it, and its fixings enable it to move around a little - but wherever he moves it, it's pointing at her bare chest. The timer passes 1:30. With no choice, he pushes the button and the flame begins to burn his daughter's skin. She screams in pain, asking him why, begging him to stop. The experience is terrible for him, inflicting such agony on his own daughter and not being able to tell her it's for the sake of her life...

BunnythesAINT
12-12-2008, 03:01 PM
Oh I dunno, Amanda breaking into hysterics after she sliced and diced her 'dead cellmate' was pretty fun :D
Uh well yes, however it's not quite as fun as when you see Charles's('s's's's) sorry behind get blown up. Much more fun =]

BunnythesAINT
12-12-2008, 03:03 PM
I think your on about the 'Chelsea Smile'? ;)
lol yeah I suppose =]

BuzzSaw
12-12-2008, 05:21 PM
i had actually come up with what i thought was an ingenius idea of putting a bunch of poisoned people in a big building where they each had to take a test to get an antidote

and then i was like... oh... whoops

ribcaged
12-12-2008, 05:42 PM
A brother and sister wake up sitting on two separate stools in a dark room. They both have barrels that looked like they've been messed around with strapped to their backs, and button in front of each of them. A clock on the wall is frozen at 5am. A television in front of them flickers to life, and a grisly puppet begins to talk to them.

"Hello George and Julie. As twins, and the last remaining members of your family, you've always been close. Much too close. You've completely eschewed all of your friends and hobbies out of the sheer decision to be with each other. Your 'obsessions', as I call them, have even borderlined on incest. Therefore, I give you a decision: the barrels strapped to your backs are filled with gasoline. The buttons in front of you are triggers to the other's barrel, which will blow your sibling apart. Hurry though, because if you don't make your decision in five minutes, your family will forever be gone. Check."

After many shed tears, a decision is made: Julie will press the button, which will blow up George, as George is sterile, and Julie must carry on the family. Julie presses her button...and her barrel activates.

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The Hornet Hall
Patrick is drifting through darkness and consciousness...he is being carried by a(or is it two? more?) hooded figure. It looks like a pig. The figure(s?) notices that he notices them and he feels a sting in his arm. Then he doesn't feel anything.

He wakes up again. He's itchy and ticklish. He feels earphones in his, well, ears. He hears a click. Then he hears this:
"Hello Patrick. You've thought yourself invincible, riding on
the back of your adopted family's riches. You've never had problems, not with your studies, not with your work, not with women. That's because when you did, you made them somebody elses problem with your bottomless pit of finances. Nothing could stop you, not a few little problems. But what happens when all those little problems become one, huge problem, one that you actually have to face for once in your life, a problem that has what you may like to call a hive mind?"
At this point, Patrick is in full consciousness. And he knows why he's itchy and ticklish.
He's in a room where the walls, floor, and ceiling are covered in hornets.
"One problem you couldn't shoo away in life is your fear and allergy of bee stings. Welcome to my hornet hall. Make yourself at home. Just don't be too hasty, if you pardon the pun. There are weight sensors all around the floor. Most of them release a pheromone which will make these hornets highly agressive and ready to protect the hive, which will cause your dreaded hives to start swelling up. One releases smoke which will calm your cellmates down long enough for you to escape."
Sure enough, Patrick sees a door at the other end of the room.
"Well Patrick? Are you just going to lie down and try to make this someone else's problem? Or are you going to put your best foot forward and do something about it?"
Patrick is in tears. He uses his hornet-covered hand to remove the earphones, which are also covered. he sees that hes been stung a few times, and is already starting to swell up.
"Oh, puck," he says with his swollen mouth.
He slowly starts to get up and, as he tries to walk along, he pulls a cord attached to his leg. He hears a beep. He sees an insect covered canister nearby. He leans over and picks it up, brushes offthe hornets, to see that its labled as the before-mentioned pheromones.
He looks around hopelessly.
"Phcrew it," he says, and starts planting his feet anywhere.
Hell ensues. A hissing comes from the canister as the pheromones are released. A buzzing sound starts in Patrick's ear, then everywhere, starting from a low drone to a sound so loud that it sounds like nothing at all. Patrick tries to say "I'm sorry...I don't want to die..." but even if he could pronounce it right, the hornets that very recently made his oral cavity their home would impede his statement. He thrashes about trying to find the square foot of floor that will save his life. Just when his eyes are swelling shut, he feels something click underneath his foot. He hears another hiss, and the dull roar recedes. He stumbles towards the door, heavier, heavier...he opens the door...God, if only he could just make it outside...heavier. Thump. Blackness.

zepp_hindle234
12-12-2008, 05:43 PM
lol there shud be esplosions. :]


btw, that was a really clever trap idea, ribcaged. :)

ribcaged
12-12-2008, 05:52 PM
lol there shud be esplosions. :]


btw, that was a really clever trap idea, ribcaged. :)
Thanks! :)

Which one? :confused:

zepp_hindle234
12-12-2008, 05:56 PM
The hornet trap was really creative. That would be something quite different if an animal/insect themed trap was used in the Saw series. :D

However, the incest trap is quite brutal.. lol. :p

ribcaged
12-12-2008, 06:02 PM
The hornet trap was really creative. That would be something quite different if an animal/insect themed trap was used in the Saw series. :D

However, the incest trap is quite brutal.. lol. :p
Thanks. I wrote them a long while ago, and some of my older writing doesn't really make sense to me now, but I still really like those ideas.

bobbylight17
12-16-2008, 10:31 AM
I can see it now religious people would riot hahaha

apple
12-20-2008, 07:41 AM
new thread ahhh. Later i will post a new trap i came up with.

apple
12-20-2008, 08:31 AM
Rodger wakes up feeling very weak, "Ohh, what the f.. ... fuck." He notices a collar on his leg. "WHat the fuck is this thing?" he tries to pull it off and it electrocutes him. This makes him relize not to tamper with it, despite is agitation he walks around the room.

Mac wakes up with a collar and starts screaming. "Mac come over here man."

"Ok, but why is there a collar on me?" "Don't mess with it and hey i found a tape recorder." They are both brothers so they sit beside one another and Rodger presses play.

"Hello gentlemen, tonight there are two lives at stake. You both live heterogeneous lives and make it habitual to keep it that way. Life is not haphazard to you, yet you try to get yourslef into trouble because attention seems to connect with you. But tonight you will both have to stay connected with eachother in order to get to freedom. the collars on you will electrocute you both if you stray to far from another." They both are happy because they are right next to eachother so they just sit there and wait.
"The room is full of bright light, sadly once the tape is over the light will go away and this room will be dark just like your life was turned into. I have hidden a key somewhere in this room and you must find it but staying close to eachother won't help because in 5 minutes the door will lock and you will both be left to rot in the darkenss. Can you both stay connected and win? Live or die; make your choice."

"Holy fuck Rodger, we are going to die." "No we are not we just have to stay together." The room goes dark and Mac runs to the other side, electorcuting them both. "hey fucker look what you did, come back here now."
"I cant; I don't see you." "Greaaaaat, i will look for the key you stay put."

he starts looking for the key and sees something shiny. He strays to far though and i geuss you now what happens. "fucking a Rodger stop!" "I see it we will both have to suffer a shock." "k" he gets the key, they get electrocuted and then the hard part comes. They have to find a way to the door and find eachother.
I will do part 2 later today or tomorrow.

ribcaged
12-20-2008, 10:13 AM
Rodger wakes up feeling very weak, "Ohh, what the f.. ... fuck." He notices a collar on his leg. "WHat the fuck is this thing?" he tries to pull it off and it electrocutes him. This makes him relize not to tamper with it, despite is agitation he walks around the room.

Mac wakes up with a collar and starts screaming. "Mac come over here man."

"Ok, but why is there a collar on me?" "Don't mess with it and hey i found a tape recorder." They are both brothers so they sit beside one another and Rodger presses play.

"Hello gentlemen, tonight there are two lives at stake. You both live heterogeneous lives and make it habitual to keep it that way. Life is not haphazard to you, yet you try to get yourslef into trouble because attention seems to connect with you. But tonight you will both have to stay connected with eachother in order to get to freedom. the collars on you will electrocute you both if you stray to far from another." They both are happy because they are right next to eachother so they just sit there and wait.
"The room is full of bright light, sadly once the tape is over the light will go away and this room will be dark just like your life was turned into. I have hidden a key somewhere in this room and you must find it but staying close to eachother won't help because in 5 minutes the door will lock and you will both be left to rot in the darkenss. Can you both stay connected and win? Live or die; make your choice."

"Holy fuck Rodger, we are going to die." "No we are not we just have to stay together." The room goes dark and Mac runs to the other side, electorcuting them both. "hey fucker look what you did, come back here now."
"I cant; I don't see you." "Greaaaaat, i will look for the key you stay put."

he starts looking for the key and sees something shiny. He strays to far though and i geuss you now what happens. "fucking a Rodger stop!" "I see it we will both have to suffer a shock." "k" he gets the key, they get electrocuted and then the hard part comes. They have to find a way to the door and find eachother.
I will do part 2 later today or tomorrow.
That'd be a great trap for a SAW parody. :D

DOJ
12-21-2008, 06:07 PM
I have a bunch of traps I've written in the past right here (http://www.angelfire.com/film/4hoh/sawtraps.html).

Post_as_I_post
12-22-2008, 12:28 PM
Damn DOJ those are intense.


The Fetusripper, holy fuck :O

TylerTehSawBoy
12-23-2008, 07:18 PM
This is a trap I've been thinking about for a long time:

A man named Justin wakes up somewhere in an old basement with a weird contraption on his head. He starts screaming for help. He then sees a Video Tape next to him and a TV with a VCR. He breaks out of his chair and puts the tape in the VCR. Billy The Puppet comes on the TV Screen. "Hello Justin. I want to play a game. For yoears you have been abusing your wife until one day you killed her. I will make sure you will never make that mistake. On you head is my Arrow Helmet. It'll impail you in the eye in 60 seconds unless you find the key. Where is it you ask? Take a look." An X-Ray of his left arm pops up on the screen with the key in it. "Live or Die, Justin. Make your choice." Justin stars crying as he picks up a scapel on the table next to him and jabs it into his arm. 30 seconds left. Justin looks into his arm for the key. but there is no key. 10 seconds left. He trys to look harder but it is too late. Justin is killed by the rusty arrow.

lilIverson09
12-23-2008, 10:32 PM
i like ribcages
its pretty intense
the whole "Oh Puck" got me laughing haha

TylerTehSawBoy
12-24-2008, 11:05 AM
A thug named Tyrone wakes up on an operation table near a hospital and notices a giant chainsaw like blade above him. Next to him is a cassette player. Written on it is "Play Me". He picks it up and presses Play. "Hello Tyrone. Right now you must be wondering where you are. Right now you are in an abanded hospital room. Do you know why you are here? Well, for years you have been stealing from others making their lifes unfortinate. I will make you regret that. Above you is the Head Splitter. It will lower each second cutting your head open in 60 seconds. The way to stop it is to find the button to stop it. Live or die, Tyrone. Make your choice." The blade turns on and starts coming near Tyrone. Tyrone starts trying to find the button. He finds it on a wall. But unfortunally, he is strapped in. 25 seconds left. He trys to find a way to get the button. He trys throwning stuff on the table. He throws a scapel. Miss. He starts crying for help. He then picks up a glass jar next to him and tosses it at the button. He finally hits the button and the strap is loosened. Billy The Puppet rides in on his bike. "Congratulations Tyrone. I hope this teaches you. Good day."

BuzzSaw
12-24-2008, 12:10 PM
Anthony and Stuart - Focus/Backstab Trap

A man wakes up in a long glass box inside a room, with a helmet-like device that extends down to his upper back and into a harness, and a ring around his neck and shudders on the sides of his eyes, preventing him from using his peripheral vision. Vices sticking through the glass clamp onto the back of his helmet and back plate, preventing movement. Also through the glass are shackles attached to both wrists and ankles, with heavy chains leading to reels. Outside of the box is a switchboard. At the end of the stretch of the glass box is a blank timer above a button and a safe. Directly in front of him is a cassette player.

He reaches forward and plays the cassette, knowing well that this is a Jigsaw trap.

"Hello, Stuart. I want to play a game. Throughout your entire career as a businessman you’ve made advancements using other peoples’ misfortunes. Even now you ignore your already successful life to find ways to further improve your reputation. Today, this will be corrected. The device you wear is highly sensitive and designed for you to remain focused on your task. Don’t let anything distract you, for if you turn your head too far, your neck will be snapped.

“At the end of your cage is a button, which will open the safe containing what you need to live. But there’s a catch. Soon, a man will enter this room. Opening the door will release the vices holding you back and start the timer in front of you. If this timer runs out, your device will activate. Focus on your success, ignore anything else.

“I should mention, you may recognize the man about to enter the room. You stabbed him in the back which resulted both in the destruction of his life, and to your presence here. He will have the choice to help you, or end you. Let the games begin.”

***In the next room***

Another man wakes up in a room. In the center of this room is a safe, and on opposite walls are doors. One door is an industrial iron door with a combination lock and the other is a steel door with a standard key lock. On a table in the corner next to the steel door is a key, an envelope, and a cassette tape player.

The man wakes up half naked with an agonizing pain in his back. He has panic written all over his face; he too knows the work of Jigsaw. Because of this, he instinctively reaches for the cassette first.

“Hello Anthony. I want to play a game. For years now since the assisted termination of your job as a businessman, you’ve let your life spiral downward. Your family has collapsed, your home has been repossessed and your friends have deserted you. This resulted from your lack of will to do anything other than take revenge on the man you believe ended your life. You are here now to fix this. You will be given a chance at justice.

“Right now, there is a poison running through your veins. The antidote is in the safe. Inside the envelope is a picture of the man in the next room and he believes you‘re the reason he‘s here. The key will lead you into the next room, where he is waiting to start his test. However, you will play a part in the game of his survival. You will have the choice to release his bonds and allow his freedom, or pull them tight until his life is ended. His fate alone carries the key to your justice, and you must extract it from him. To do this, you must turn your back to him once more.

“His test will last 90 seconds, however your poison should take affect in about two and a half minutes. When the timer to his test ends, the safe in this room will open, containing your just reward. Don’t stab yourself in the back. Live or die, it‘s your choice.”

******

Anthony opens the envelope. It’s a picture of a man named Stuart Powers - the very man who stole his life away by backstabbing him to get ahead. Instantly he is enraged. He remembers the countdown and opens the door.

The timer begins, the vices are opened and Stuart begins to pull against the weight of the chains. Upon the sight of Stuart, Anthony mumbles beneath his breath.

“You son of a bitch.”

Enraged further he begins yelling.

“You son of a bitch! You’re responsible for all this you fucking son of a bitch! You’re at my mercy now! Remember me? Look at me! Look at me!”

Stuart hears this, but remembering not to focus on anything other than his goal keeps him from fatally turning his head. He panics as he does not know exactly who stands outside his box, especially while knowing his life hangs in the balance of his actions.

1:03

Stuart is now about a third of the way along in his cage, struggling more and more under the weight of the chains. Anthony looks at the switchboard with a lighted button and a dial. A crude sign next to either gadget describe their functions: Release Shackles… Power chain reels. Upon seeing the dial, Anthony notices the reels that Stuart’s chains are wrapped in, slowly turning as Stuart draws out more slack with each pull forward.

:50

Anthony’s poison begins to take affect.

:49

Anthony turns the dial slightly. The reels begin to turn in the opposite direction of Stuart’s pull. Stuart panics.

“What.. What the fuck!? What’s happening!? What are you doing!?”

“This is your fault, Stuart! You never should have told the boss, you never should have told the boss!”

“What the fuck!?” Stuart begins sobbing as the dial is turned further and the reels take on a pull that is stronger than his. “No! No no no no! I’m sorry! I’m so sorry! I don’t even know who you are!”

:33

“This is Anthony Marks, Stuart. You sold me out to the boss you son of a bitch!”

:30

As he remembers who Anthony is, he begins to break down and cry, naturally weakening his pulling strength.

:23

“I’m sorry, I’m so sorry. Please… oh god please!”

:18

Anthony has no trace of regret or remorse in his mind. Rather, all he is thinking is “C’mon, c’mon hurry, hurry…” He cranks up the dial till it begins dragging Stuart all the way back.

:07... :06... :05

Stuart gives up. He knows he’s out of time and nothing will change it. He contributes his last seconds to trying to force the device off.

:01

SNAP!

Stuart goes limp but otherwise doesn‘t move; pinned up to the wall as his chains had drug him to his starting position. His head sits at a disgusting angle.

Anthony wastes no time. He bolts as soon as he hears the click of the safe unlocking behind him. He knows he has precious seconds left, and yanks the safe door open.

What he finds, however, is disheartening: Another cassette player.

“Hello, Anthony. If you are listening to this then you have failed my test. Within seconds you will be dead, so I will make this quick. I told you Stuart’s fate held the key to your justice, which will soon be served. I also told you not to stab yourself in the back, which you have done by not following my simple instructions…

Weakened by poison, Anthony throws the tape recorder aside and begins to search the room for anything, still listening.

“… Your fear of being cheated again has lead you to act against the rules…”

He starts pounding on the doors as he screams fruitlessly for help.

“… You were told that to extract the key to your justice, you had to turn your back to Stuart once more…”

As his last seconds wind down, we see him from the back, his shoulders and upper back cut off by the top of the screen. We see blood has run down his back.

“… Had you done so, he would have seen that which he could not see in his test…”

He falls to his knees, showing us the rest of his back …

“… What is written on your back…”

… and the combination to the iron door carved into it.

******

“… is the combination to the door leading to your freedom. You should never have brought that loathing attitude home, Stuart. You destroyed that part of your life and now you’ve destroyed what was left of it.” (Maniacal laugh ensues)

Upon the police investigation in which the safe in Stuart’s trap was opened, its contents were logged which included the following: a labeled key to the device, a labeled key to the door, and a syringe filled with some sort of antidote. The button at the end of the cage opened the shackles and would have stopped the timer.

Bravo_1
12-26-2008, 02:41 PM
Tied guy, noise-measuring device in front of him, some machine causing him pain (for some period of time, or until something ends). When the noise (from guys crying) exceeds XY decibels, victim somehow dies. The victim is supposed to remain silent when facing huge pain in order to survive. Point: he was "silent" (at court as witness...) or was too "loud" (false evidence, whisperer...) when he shouldnt have been. Can he do the same/opposite now?

philsaw101134
12-27-2008, 09:34 PM
I always thought something involving deafening yourself would be quite painful in a trap.

SawAniland
12-27-2008, 10:33 PM
hmmm

I have been playing around with a major trap like the one in Saw III with Jeff. I know it is way to similar to Saw III's main trap outline. But tell me what you think.

You take this guy who hates his life. He hates everyone around him. He can't make decisions. Then he has to go through tests with a bunch of different people who are placed in traps. He can save them or not. However, Jigsaw keeps promising that he will meet the person responsible for all of his sorrow. When he finally makes it to the door were this person is. A tape asks if he can just forget about his sorrow and not worry about it. He goes through the door. When he gets in there, the room is really dark. The door shuts and locks. Hundreds of TV's turn on around him and Billy is on every screen. He tells the guy he should have just forgot his sorrows, but now he will leave him there to rot. The TV goes of, and a light starts to flicker. As we see this man is trapped in a room of mirrors.

That would be very cool.

TylerTehSawBoy
12-28-2008, 02:53 PM
This is my version of the Glass Box from Saw V. It's not gonna be used as some kind of escape. Here we go:

A man wakes up on a trampolene like blanket wearing no clothes except for his Underwear while over a clear box with glass shards inside it. Billy The Puppet comes on screen. "Hello Pastor Jacob. For years you have sexually abused kids in your Sunday School while making other kids watch. This is an indefenant sin. I will make you regret that. You are over my Glass Box. In 15 seconds the door to the box will close snapping the blanket and sending you into the glass box. Live or die, Pastor. Make your choice. The pastor tries to get up but he fail thus sending him into the glass box and killing him.

KillerZavatar
12-29-2008, 03:38 AM
This is my version of the Glass Box from Saw V. It's not gonna be used as some kind of escape. Here we go:

A man wakes up on a trampolene like blanket wearing no clothes except for his Underwear while over a clear box with glass shards inside it. Billy The Puppet comes on screen. "Hello Pastor Jacob. For years you have sexually abused kids in your Sunday School while making other kids watch. This is an indefenant sin. I will make you regret that. You are over my Glass Box. In 15 seconds the door to the box will close snapping the blanket and sending you into the glass box. Live or die, Pastor. Make your choice. The pastor tries to get up but he fail thus sending him into the glass box and killing him.
umpf... good for southpark, but not saw imo

TylerTehSawBoy
12-29-2008, 05:42 PM
umpf... good for southpark, but not saw imo
Yeah. If South Park spoofed Saw, this trap would happen.

Mr. Briggs Inc.
12-29-2008, 08:45 PM
How about a mouth-trap, since we've had so many head-traps? Victim eats nothing but junk food and supplements, and as a result becomes sickly and dependant. Now they are poisoned and chained to a death bed, forced to chew glass through a tube (Anyone see GAG?) in order to get to the antidote-pill ("The first pill that will do you any real good...") at the top. At the bottom of the top there is a wire-mesh, twisting around the head, simultaneously keeping them from letting all the glass out, and allowing them to spit it out once the grains become fine enough.

Maxima
01-01-2009, 03:08 PM
How about something that has to do with teeth?! (teeth being pulled, grinding one's teeth as somebody mentioned in a different thread, etc)

I would really like to see a constrictor/binding trap. (i.e. the person must escape before cords cut off circulation in the hands/feet/ head and kill the person or something.

It would be cool to see a family in a trap (cousins, sister and brother)

BuzzSaw
01-01-2009, 06:02 PM
im really trying to come up with another "Saw short" which is what i kind of refer to my trap post in this thread as.. but alas my brain cant come up with anything too original or exciting... or gruesome

Tomorrow Knight
01-02-2009, 11:34 AM
How about a trap that slowly cuts into the victims foot and rises slowly 'up' their bodies'?

Now that would be very painful.

tobinbellpwns
01-02-2009, 11:48 AM
how about cut in half vertically

........lol

but seriously

impalement. i want impalement

Mr. Briggs Inc.
01-02-2009, 04:27 PM
how about cut in half vertically

........lol

but seriously

impalement. i want impalement
Hello Agent Bond... I expect you to appreciate living. X)

Impalement could be cool! Like a spike stuck through an area in the midsection free from vital organs, however the victim is then pushed or pulled downward in the spike, which expands as it gets closer to the bottom, pushing a larger hole into the body until it disrupts the placement of the more vital organs and kills them. (Still, how would they escape?)

TylerTehSawBoy
01-06-2009, 09:56 AM
The Sticky Room

A woman awakes on a board a foot in room with a million of orbs on the floor. In front of her is a tape hanging in front of her with "Play Me" written on it. She preses play. "Hello Allison. For years you have been lying to your friends and family and friends and you have been sticking to these lies. How would you like to stick to something else. When this tape ends, the board will drop you onto the floor of orbs. You will have 60 seconds to walk all over them to get to the door leading to the exit. It will not be easy as these orbs will be sticky thus sticking you to the floor. If you do not get to the door in time, a bomb will explode, thus killing you. Live or die; Make your choice."

I will finish this later.

light101dark
01-06-2009, 10:02 AM
Hello Agent Bond... I expect you to appreciate living. X)

Impalement could be cool! Like a spike stuck through an area in the midsection free from vital organs, however the victim is then pushed or pulled downward in the spike, which expands as it gets closer to the bottom, pushing a larger hole into the body until it disrupts the placement of the more vital organs and kills them. (Still, how would they escape?)

Yeah!

or or or

like this person is impaled on like loads of spikes, but theyre all going through vital organs and veins and stuff, and someone has to pull them out in order for their own survival, like a abused wife or something

i rather like that idea
wait
what?

Big Boss
01-06-2009, 03:02 PM
like a abused wife or something

"I'm Sooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyy!!!11!!"

The Trapmaster
01-07-2009, 12:57 PM
I'd like to see the main traps (the ones that are connected with the main plot) explore the human emotions.

Indifference
Sorrow
Justice
Anger
Mercy


It'd be cool to see, like, 3 people going through a series of tests that test the human emotions, for whatever reasons people have forgotten how to appriciate humanity.

TylerTehSawBoy
01-07-2009, 01:55 PM
I'm writing a new trap right now. I'm not gonna post anything about it yet.

GOREgeousAw
01-07-2009, 02:00 PM
dude, i think it would be awesome
if the traps centered around
the 7 deadly sins.
like the saw 2 house kinda
but 1 sin for each person.

...ooh. epic.

mastae
01-07-2009, 02:21 PM
dude, i think it would be awesome
if the traps centered around
the 7 deadly sins.
like the saw 2 house kinda
but 1 sin for each person.

...ooh. epic.
The critics would eat that shit up.

"SAW IS JUST MAKING A FAILED ATTEMPT AT SE7EN"

GOREgeousAw
01-07-2009, 02:21 PM
The critics would eat that shit up.

"SAW IS JUST MAKING A FAILED ATTEMPT AT SE7EN"
yeah they would
but saw is better
and they'd make it good.
=[

mastae
01-07-2009, 02:23 PM
yeah they would
but saw is better
and they'd make it good.
=[
Hm I don't know if they would... Se7en was pretty goddamn good lol

Anyways, the Saw traps that I am currently building, (have already written in), and will film; center around the three wise monkeys (Hear No Evil, See No Evil, Speak No Evil).

TylerTehSawBoy
01-07-2009, 06:39 PM
Face Claw Trap

A man wakes up on a chair with a claw hanging from the ceiling on his face. He starts screaming for help. Billy The Puppet comes on screen. "Hello William, I want to play a game. Since the death of your brother, you've been taking your anger out on random people who were innocent. You've even killed a few. The thing on your face is attatched to your skull and won't come off unless the key is found. I will give you one clue to where the key is." The TV shows an X-Ray of his leg. "But which leg? Live or die; make your choice.




This will be finished tomorrow.

joey_taylor563692
01-07-2009, 07:49 PM
That idea with the 7 Deadly Sins actually intrigued me, so I started to do a bit. Here's one based on lust:



A man, 30's, wakes up chained to a wooden table by his wrists and feet. On the far end of the table is a large circular saw, inactive....for now. Above his eyes are two spikes, which seem to connect to a metal box by his hand.

Billy: Hello, Larry, I want to play a game. They say that a woman's body is a temple. You know this well, as you make a living off of desecrating those temples. Night after night, you force yourself onto a woman and use whatever you can to satisfy yourself like there's no tomorrow. I can assure you, there won't be....if you fail.

Now you are chained to a "bed," your legs spread open, about to be penetrated by a deadly instrument. Does this sound familiar? The key to your chains is in the box by your hand. You must give up the two things most responsible for your crooked view of women---you must push your eyes in the spikes above your head to open the box.

Tonight, you will see the error of your ways, but will you make it the last thing you see in order to survive? Let the game begin.

joey_taylor563692
01-07-2009, 10:24 PM
A man in his 40's wakes up wearing two things: his boxers, and a nail bomb around his stomach. There's also a mirror...

Billy: "Hello Gerald, I want to play a game. As a nutritionist, you know that food is a necessity. But where is the necessity in your consumption out of boredom, or simply just to consume? It has been causing you all of your hard earnings so you can prevent your so-called emptiness in the pit of your stomach.

Well you will find a large jar of nails wrapped tightly around your stomach. A minute after this tape is over, an explosion will go off in that jar, and the nails will shred you to pieces. Two keys are needed to unlock the bomb from your stomach and to unlock the only door out of here. Their location should be of....no surprise to you....."

(Like clockwork, Gerald feels two lumps in his mouth: one in his lower gums, and the other under his tongue. The two keys.)

"Show me how hungry you are for a second chance at life, Gerald. Live or die...make your choice."

GOREgeousAw
01-07-2009, 10:34 PM
i likes thems joeys.

...s?

joey_taylor563692
01-07-2009, 10:49 PM
Thanks yous, Claires, mores tos comes laters todays :)

joey_taylor563692
01-08-2009, 03:50 PM
A 30-year old wakes up in his boxers, his hands tied behind his back by chains. His ankles are chained together, too. He's lying on his stomach on a maze-like room full of broken glass.


Billy: "Hello Gabriel, I want to play a game. You were ranked one of the top accountants in the city. But I find your method of getting their distasteful. Did you think your long-running act of laundering would go unnoticed?

You will find yourself on the ground, with your hands tied behind your back and your legs bound. Don't let the glass get in your way of being earth-bound like you usually have been. There's a slow-acting poison eating away at you. Find the antidote in my maze, and then make your way out. Hurry though, in 30 minutes, the door will lock, and this room becomes your tomb.

Make this the last time you crawl around the possesions that the earth beneath you offers. Live or die, make your choice."

joey_taylor563692
01-08-2009, 07:23 PM
A man wakes up and can’t see a thing because it’s so dark. The only thing he can determine is that he is knee-deep in water.



Billy: "Hello Sean, I want to play a game. The unfortunate passing of your daughter sent your life into a downward spiral of depression. You sit alone and idle in your house, literally watching the whole world pass you by. You find comfort in the darkness of your home. You've become an expert at throwing your life away, so does this mean you've lost all appreciation for it? Tonight you'll show me.

This TV is providing the only light, and when this message ends, it will leave you in darkness again. There are four containers in the room. All four carry….a special content, but only one has a key needed to unlock the door and walk out of this room.

(These containers, hung on the wall, contain acid.)

Or, if you think you’re tough enough to handle the current that will soon flow through the water, you can do what you do best and remain idle. The door will unlock, but I doubt you’ll be alive when it does.

Will my words be the lamp unto your feet that cause you to finally act? The choice is yours Sean. Let the game begin."

ribcaged
01-08-2009, 08:15 PM
"Hello Giselle."

Words grate themselves out of the tape recorder Giselle found in her hands when she woke up in her pitch-black cell. She recognized the voice on the tape; but wasn't Jigsaw dead?

"You find yourself a master of words; you talk yourself out of any situation, or in to one. You are a manipulator, you always have been. But will you always be? Just last month, you managed to talk yourself out of being charged for something you couldn't manage to control: your vehicle. You ended up hitting an innocent child, and now he lies in a coma in the hospitol. In the next room, you will come face to face with your obsession: treating people like a ball and chain, wrapped around your finger."

Giselle looks down at where she believes her hands to be and wiggled her fingers, feeling something wrapped around each of them. She hears a low humming and a heavy object scraping and vibrating on the ground, somewhere near her.

"Hopefully your legs are as quick as your tongue, Giselle. It's your move."

Still terrified in the dark, she tries to bang on the walls and cry for help, but the things around her fingers, which feel like wire, dig into her skin. Suddenly, she notices the dragging along the floor has stopped. She puts an ear to the wall closest to the sounds, and listens. The wall right next to her immediately crashes inwards, sending splinters and light pouring in.

The next room is round. In the middle of the ceiling, a strange contraption is connected by a long chain to a large, black bowling ball. The ball is being swung quickly around the room, which was what hit the door to Giselle's cell. She sees that it is fishing wire that is wrapped tightly around her fingers, but she is able to pull the cord far, all ten of them. At the other end of the chamber, a door is waiting to be opened.

Giselle steps out into the next room.

Maxima
03-22-2009, 01:01 PM
I know this one may sound really stupid, but it's worth a try:

A girl wakes up in a dark room. Judging by the amount of echo made by her movement, she realizes its a very large room. A cable wrapped around her hand is pulled accidentally, and a TV from the ceiling lowers and a strange puppet appears on screen.

"Hello, Veronica, I want to play a game. For most of your life you have thrived on self-indulgence and selfishness. You seek to better your image through fake and pathetic means. You do this because you cannot stand to look at the figure behind the mask, that woman in the mirror that stares back at you. As many of your peers have told you, you are beautiful the way you are. But why is it that you have continued to seek more beauty than you already have?

The devices surrounding the interior of this room are ones you should be all too familiar with: heating lamps, those similar to ones found in crude and cheap tanning machines. However these lamps are much larger, and within 10 minutes of their activation, your body heat will skyrocket, and your skin will burn to ash, rendering you lifeless.
If you want to live, all you have to do is turn off the machines. But in order for them to power down, you will have to sacrifice the beauty you have long since taken for granted. Can you give up the one thing you have lived for for so long to avoid death? Make your choice."



With a loud crackle, the tv turns to static. As the TV powers down, the room takes on an infra-red glow. A timer set on top of the exit doors begins its horrific countdown. Veronica drops to her knees and begins to sob, both because of her situation, and because of the immediate burns she feels on her skin as the lamps increase in luminosity. After a lot of whining, she staggers to her feet to try and open the doors on the other side of the room. She soon realizes they are sealed tight.

Remembering her task, she runs to the base of the nearest lamp. Instead of seeing an "off" switch, Veronica sees an opening in the device. Preparing herself for the agony awaiting, she sticks her hand and forearm inside. She is met with searing pain as the light from the lamp slowly diminishes. After what seemed like forever, she jerks her arm out, and falls to the floor. Her arm is covered in blood and dead skin.

"I have.....to keep going...." she whispers.

The timer reaches the 8 minute mark just as she pulls her leg out of the 4th lamp base. Her whole body is red from the infernal heat, as well as covered in gashes and flaking skin. Crawling, she reaches the last of the heating lamps, expecting to have to place her hands in again to turn it off. This machine, however, had a device similar to a fume hood attached to it. A picture of her face was taped to the device, reading "What's inside is more important than the outside."

With this, she braces herself as she opens the machine and places her head inside. The metal sheets inside soon change to a glowing red, and Veronica experiences heat worse than any she had ever felt. She could feel the skin falling off her face as the heat continued to rise. Veronica, deafened by her own screams and blinded by the light intensity, collapses backwards as the room returned to darkness. The injuries sustained prevent her from moving a muscle in her body. Then, with a screech, the exit doors open, revealing the halls of a prison.

But all Veronica could do was lay in the dark.

Alsatian
03-22-2009, 01:05 PM
Is saw VI going to be like II and V with a group or like III and IV with just a single person. By the looks of things i think its going towards a single person one.

Attack Dog
03-22-2009, 01:07 PM
Is saw VI going to be like II and V with a group or like III and IV with just a single person. By the looks of things i think its going towards a single person one.
Patrick said that it's going to be like Saw V, pitting victims against each other.

The13thSign
03-24-2009, 03:51 PM
While the movie itself was a piss-poor straight-to-video rip-off of Saw... "Are You Scared?" actually has some saving grace to it in that it presents one or two interesting prospects for traps.

One of them being the aforementioned, family/brother-sister "Ties That Bind" set-up. "AYS's" featured a brother and sister who were placed in a similar situation to what I believe was one of ribcaged's ideas where one was forced to kill/hurt the other in order for one to survive. I'm not totally sold on how the "one must die" fits in with John's philosophy, but it would certainly seem to fit Hoffman's current M.O. Possibly something where the siblings are a blood match (one has always, say been overly-protective of the other and never let them fight their own battles), and we have something with two separate but congruent tests going on:

- The "younger" is bleeding to death (or has to perform some task that requires them to cut themself or draw blood).

- The "older/protector" has all the tools necessary to set up a transfusion to supply his sibling with life-force, by putting his own health at risk, however he is advised by "Billy" that such would not be a wise decision for either of them and to simply stand aside and let his brother/sister fight their own battle.

- The twist: The "older" has been injected with an anti-coagulant, thus if he performs the transfusion, he not only transfers blood containing the agent and preventing his sibling's wounds from actually clotting over, but he also injures himself causing a wound that will not heal and will slowly bleed him out as well. For the record... this idea was also inspired by Peter's comment about a whole new twist on "bloodshed".

The other concept that "AYS?" played with was with that of the hypochondriac: Essentially a victim was left bleeding from wounds on her wrists and stomach, and had to "master her fear" and reach into a tank containing rat's and other vile generally "germ-associated" apparati/creatures in order to retrieve the cell-phone to call for her rescue. Again, rather un-Jigsaw... but the premise has potential. I'll work on this one a little bit and see what I come up with.

BuzzSaw
03-24-2009, 03:56 PM
Hi! .

The13thSign
03-24-2009, 04:01 PM
Hi! .

My first greeting! I feel special. Someone spit on me and make me feel worthless again. Please!

Attack Dog
03-24-2009, 04:06 PM
My first greeting! I feel special. Someone spit on me and make me feel worthless again. Please!
Nope! I'ma do the opposite... I'MA REP U! MWAHHHAHAHAHA!

Waitwut?

BuzzSaw
03-24-2009, 04:07 PM
My first greeting! I feel special. Someone spit on me and make me feel worthless again. Please!

ptuey

oh the irony.

BuzzSaw
04-16-2009, 09:38 PM
i thought of a great way to get some good suspense out of a constriction trap (ive heard wants for a constriction trap on here a lot)

imagine a guy thats tied with several lengths of barbed wire to a solid wall with slots. each end of each length is fed through a slot, a small loop and then attached to a giant gear. as that gear turns, it tightens each strand of wire across the victims body.

havent thought of a way to get out....

AstroMike314
04-28-2009, 08:28 PM
Wouldn't it be sweet if in Saw VI they had a trap that involved cutting off one's own tongue in order to survive? I don't know how it would work, but it'd be different and gruesome to see. Just trying to think of different things, ha.

->ReverseBearTrap<-
05-21-2009, 08:27 AM
A man in his late 30s or early 40s wakes up with barbed wire coating the inside of his mouth.A TV flickers on "hello James i wanna play a game when this tape ends you will see the murderer of your wife now now dont scream or talk or the wire in your mouth will cut your face to shreds you want to kill him but i tell you to do the other let the game begin"
he mumbles "whaf vi vuck" not listening to jigsaw he walks forward towards jonathan but feels a tearing sensation he keeps walking forward but then he notices hooks attached to the wire but he keeps walking forward when they also get cauhgt on other hooks and rip his face like a giant smile he goes limp and a voice says smile please and a camera takes a photo the words saw VI appear with hoffman saying "GAME OVER"

AmandaAvenger
05-21-2009, 08:29 AM
A man in his late 30s or early 40s wakes up with barbed wire coating the inside of his mouth.A TV flickers on "hello James i wanna play a game when this tape ends you will see the murderer of your wife now now dont scream or talk or the wire in your mouth will cut your face to shreds you want to kill him but i tell you to do the other let the game begin"
he mumbles "whaf vi vuck" not listening to jigsaw he walks forward towards jonathan but feels a tearing sensation he keeps walking forward but then he notices hooks attached to the wire but he keeps walking forward when they also get cauhgt on other hooks and rip his face like a giant smile he goes limp and a voice says smile please and a camera takes a photo the words saw VI appear with hoffman saying "GAME OVER"

Umm, very... intense.

BuzzSaw
05-21-2009, 08:39 AM
A man in his late 30s or early 40s wakes up with barbed wire coating the inside of his mouth.A TV flickers on "hello James i wanna play a game when this tape ends you will see the murderer of your wife now now dont scream or talk or the wire in your mouth will cut your face to shreds you want to kill him but i tell you to do the other let the game begin"
he mumbles "whaf vi vuck" not listening to jigsaw he walks forward towards jonathan but feels a tearing sensation he keeps walking forward but then he notices hooks attached to the wire but he keeps walking forward when they also get cauhgt on other hooks and rip his face like a giant smile he goes limp and a voice says smile please and a camera takes a photo the words saw VI appear with hoffman saying "GAME OVER"


that whole thing is one sentence.

AmandaAvenger
05-21-2009, 08:39 AM
that whole thing is one sentence.

You, sir, are a genius.

->ReverseBearTrap<-
05-22-2009, 02:56 AM
that whole thing is one sentence. YEA SORRY ILL DO IT AGAIN :)

->ReverseBearTrap<-
05-22-2009, 02:58 AM
A man in his late 30s or early 40s wakes up with barbed wire coating the inside of his mouth.A TV flickers on "hello James i wanna play a game when this tape ends you will see the murderer of your wife now now dont scream or talk or the wire in your mouth will cut your face to shreds you want to kill him but i tell you to do the other let the game begin."
He mumbles "whaf vi vuck" not listening to jigsaw he walks forward towards jonathan but feels a tearing sensation, he keeps walking forward but then he notices hooks attached to the wire. he keeps walking forward when they also get caught on other hooks and rip his face like a giant smile he goes limp and a voice says smile please and a camera takes a photo the words saw VI appear with hoffman saying "GAME OVER"

->ReverseBearTrap<-
05-22-2009, 02:59 AM
Umm, very... intense.
ty thank you

->ReverseBearTrap<-
05-22-2009, 03:08 AM
Hey thx AmandaAvenger

BuzzSaw
05-22-2009, 07:10 AM
1) dont quadruple post.
2) Amanda avenger was, im pretty sure, being sarcastic.
3) you didnt need to repost the same thing, you could have editted the first post.

AmandaAvenger
05-22-2009, 07:58 AM
Amanda avenger was, im pretty sure, being sarcastic.

Shhh, he hasn't found out yet.

I Won The Game
05-23-2009, 05:39 PM
A loud noise blared through the room, waking the six people up. Their lips were sewn shut. Bert, an overweight man in his late twenties, was the first to notice the tape recorder resting on a table. He picked it up and pressed play. There was an awful hiss of static, then:

"Hello, Beau...Bert...Felicity...Sagara...Tonya...Parker. There is a poison surging through your bodies. Antidotes are scattered throughout the house. But can you earn them? You will have to repent for your sins to do so. Four hours after this tape ends, the only door will open.

By the way, I'd be careful about the man injected with a different poison, in this building. His name is Reynold. He will only earn his antidote if all of you are dead.

Let the game begin."

Several doors opened.

->ReverseBearTrap<-
05-24-2009, 08:28 AM
Shhh, he hasn't found out yet.
Yeah right i go on every day haha oh and buzzsaw im a newbie k

->ReverseBearTrap<-
05-24-2009, 08:29 AM
1) dont quadruple post.
2) Amanda avenger was, im pretty sure, being sarcastic.
3) you didnt need to repost the same thing, you could have editted the first post.
Wait,you can edit posts

BuzzSaw
05-24-2009, 09:16 AM
Wait,you can edit posts

you're telling me!

The Trapmaster
05-24-2009, 03:39 PM
I had this idea:

3 people wake up in an abandoned hospital, and another 3 people wake up elsewhere in the hospital. Each trap they go through symbolizes some kind of emotion, and each one brings them closer to the other group.

Mr. Briggs Inc.
05-24-2009, 06:03 PM
Maybe a variation on the emotion thing would be someone going through traps symbolizing the 5 stages of grief:

A denial trap, where the subject has to get over their bewilderment and act fast to live, "anger" where the subject has to act carefully to win, "bargaining" where maybe the subject has to talk another one down, "depression" where the subject has to find a way out something the seems conventionally hopeless, and "acceptance" where the subject has to face a hugely sacrificial test to get out alive.

BuzzSaw
05-24-2009, 06:37 PM
Maybe a variation on the emotion thing would be someone going through traps symbolizing the 5 stages of grief:

A denial trap, where the subject has to get over their bewilderment and act fast to live, "anger" where the subject has to act carefully to win, "bargaining" where maybe the subject has to talk another one down, "depression" where the subject has to find a way out something the seems conventionally hopeless, and "acceptance" where the subject has to face a hugely sacrificial test to get out alive.

win .

priyal1
05-25-2009, 08:11 AM
Hi I am new here. I dont know if anyone has mentioned this but I may aswell give it a go. What if Jill and Hoffman were a couple and thats why Jigsaw said in the autopsy tape that Hoffman will be tested so maybe he found out before he died and recorded the tape. It would also explain why Jill said Strahm was following her in saw v so maybe she was working with Hoffman to frame Strahm. Maybe in that box will be somthing that shows John found out the truth so thats why she shut it immediately. Please tell me what you think guys.

The Trapmaster
05-25-2009, 11:51 AM
Maybe a variation on the emotion thing would be someone going through traps symbolizing the 5 stages of grief:

A denial trap, where the subject has to get over their bewilderment and act fast to live, "anger" where the subject has to act carefully to win, "bargaining" where maybe the subject has to talk another one down, "depression" where the subject has to find a way out something the seems conventionally hopeless, and "acceptance" where the subject has to face a hugely sacrificial test to get out alive.

Yes. Epic Yes.

ribcaged
05-26-2009, 06:04 PM
I was thinking about some of the traps about a month ago, and it got me thinking: almost all of the traps are always so dark and gloomy, and in really creepy buildings. Which led to thinking about a trap that was outside in broad daylight. A public trap sounded really interesting to me, but a trap in the middle of a crowd wasn't so appealing. Going back to the whole anti-dark/gloomy feel, I thought of a trap on the top of a skyscraper during the middle of the day. Here's the result of about a week of on-and-off writing.

The Height of Ambition
Tanya sighs...again. No, Charlie, you can’t have ice cream. Dammit. Once again, her son has asked her for more sugar, even though he just finished a sucker. But of course, that’s par for the course when we’re talking Charlie. Her sister keeps on telling her that it’s normal for a child to want an IV of sweets, but COME ON.

Sigh.

But even if, for some strange reason, all children have symptoms of ADHD, can’t Tanya just stroll into her office on her day off to pick something up without the “MOMMYMOMMYMOMMY” grinding into her head? At least the building will keep him busy. Hopefully. It’s a fairly new tower, probably could be called a skyscraper, and it’s beautiful. The inside is completely hollow; all the offices line the walls of the 48 stories reaching high into the sky above. This same sky is visible by a glass ceiling, allowing natural light to flood the lobby during the day. And the reason for it all is her no-good, snobby boss: Audrey Collins, of the Collins & Marcotte law firm, of the Collins and Marcotte Tower. Stupid bi-

“MOMMYMOMMYMOMMY”

Naturally, the building can’t silence Charlie, where it succeeded with so many lawyers...now there’s a laugh. Tanya turns to her son, in the middle of the lobby, where the light from above seems to simply glow, to see him pointing directly up.

“Can we go up there too?”
-----------------------------------------
A blinding light pierces through Audrey's eyelids, jolting her out of her dazed slumber. Everything's a blur to her groggy eyes...for a while. She's on her back, dressed in her best suit. Her leg itches, so she scratches it with her other foot. (Jinglejingle). She can see the sky: all of it, there are no buildings that she can see. Birds fly overhead. The sun is a constant suggestion to close her eyes, so she averts her head to the side.

And then she realizes she can see through the floor: all the way to the bottom, through crystal-clear glass, forty-eight stories below.
She sits up and realizes that she's at the top of her building, her
(life)
office where she goes to work every day as a partner in her law firm; the place she's fought tooth and nail to build from the ground up. Looking down at her feet, distracted once more by the noise they make, she realizes they’re each shackled to two chains, which twist and tangle to opposite ends of the fragile roof. There’s a tape recorder lying next to her, attached to a cord weaving its way to the exit from the roof. Contrasting next to the tiny machine is a sledgehammer, and she spots four cinderblocks breaking the flat glasscape. After trying to pull the chains to no avail, she presses Play on the recorder.

“Hello, Audrey.

Here you are, at the height of your ambition," says a deep, rasping voice, sounding as dead as a ghost and twice as haunting. "Years have passed since law school, filled with half-truths and misconceptions
(howdoesheknowaboutLily?)
about who you are all the way down....but such is an occupational hazard, I suppose.

Do you feel high and mighty now, Audrey? This is what you've been waiting for: a chance to bring yourself back down to earth."

A tumult of emotions spinning through her mind, she hears that the tape’s voice is echoing...but how? And then it clicks: the chord must be hooked into the building’s PA system, delivering her message to the world. She flips onto her belly to see the ants below, marching along in their various patterns. She cries for help, but who can hear you almost a mile above the ground? The only answers to her screaming against the glass are the puppet's echoes through the building. She can almost see the people in the lobby looking around, wondering where the Devil is speaking from, but completely unaware that his voice is coming from above.

"Four charges lie in the corners of the playing field. In two minutes, they will detonate and you will fall. I wouldn’t try to disarm them if I were you. Two of the four prisons around you hold the key to your restraints. You have some options on how to get to the keys: you can break the blocks yourself, for they are just as weak as you are; or you can use the weapon beside you and risk having the rug pulled from under your feet.

The rules are clear. Let the game begin.”

Audrey almost outright faints when the tape ends; this is the first time her attorney’s brain has failed to kick in right after a turn in events, although this rooftop is so similar to a court room. The steady beep of the charges competes with her roaring heart for her attention. Tentatively, the lawyer picks up the hammer beside her and makes her way towards the nearest block, jingling all the way. Deciding that the hammer is not the right course of action, she puts it down gently, respectful of the damage it can do to her. Audrey picks up the surprisingly light block

beepthumpthump.beepthumpthump.

and tries to rip it apart using fingernails bitten to the quick. Almost immediately, her hands become rough and scraped with each chip that flies off. Part of her knuckle starts to bleed. She can’t keep up with this if she has to do this two more times. Audrey hopes that she’s chosen the right block...and those hopes are dashed to the floor along with the cracked, hollow shells of the first cinderblock.

bee-THUMPTHUMP-bee-THUMPTHU

As she falls to the glass below her, tears streaming down her face, she realizes that the sledgehammer is her only choice: her hands are too slippery with blood to break another. She picks up the weapon, gingerly...and it slips out of her fingers. A large crack

THUMP

appears beneath the heavy tool. With a cry of desperation, as if the hammer wounded her rather than the building, she lies flat on her belly to even out the weight and reaches out for her way out. Grasping the handle, Audrey is able to slide it over the glass closer to her body, barely making any more cracks in the glass.

On her hands and knees now. Pushing the hammer in front of her as she jingles along, the footcuffs starting to chafe her legs. Her journey almost feels like kindergarten again: the blood from her hands traces her path like finger paint. The second block is closer now, as is 0:00 on the bombs. She makes it there, and decides to tap it instead of going for the more brutish method. But there’s no time! Gasping from the wounds in her hands when Audrey picks up the hammer, she raises it up towards the sky. And then down again. And up. And down. Chunks of the block fly towards the edge of the glass, and eventually a shiny thing does too. Realizing that this is a key, she scrambles over towards the side of the roof, regardless of the new cracks in her floor. She’s almost got it in her hand....

ching!

The chain around her heels snaps taut, with her hand inches away from freedom.

beep.....beep...

Suddenly, a thought pierces crystal clear through her mind, rising above the murky waters of her past: what will happen when the glass breaks? The shards will fall, she’ll fall...into the lobby below, filled with the oblivious citizens. ‘There must be a way to get them all out, surely there’s enough time to save everyone...’ she thinks, pushing away the pain and the memories. She gets down on her floor and peers through; the ants are still in the midst of their march...but wait: there are security guards running up the stairs! She could still be saved!

And then she realizes that more than a minute has passed, while her would-be saviours are still barely halfway up the tower. Audrey Collins has to save herself.

She grabs the sledgehammer one last time to begin another jaunt across the pane when she almost trips over the answer to at least one of her questions: the wire from the tape player.

“It’s hooked into the PA!” Audrey gasps.

She seizes the wire with one bloody hand and pulls the tape player across the roof to her. She picks it up, leaving her other legacy all over it, and pushes Record. Composing herself at the same time as she walks toward another block, she announces:

“This is Audrey Collins; I’m speaking to you all from the top of the building. I need everyone to get out of the lobby and into an office within the next couple of seconds, because the roof is going to fall in any moment now.” She almost breaks at this point, not quite at terms with her fate. But she goes on anyway, serving her building to the very end.

ribcaged
05-26-2009, 06:05 PM
She’s reached the block, and she knows that this is it: this block decides whether she transcends or descends. She drops the tape player, still recording, and it makes a crack beside her foot, which goes unnoticed. She raises the hammer, then brings it down again. The glass beneath her takes the stress but barely. Among the pieces of the brick...another shiny object! She grasps it in her hand and leans over to release her right ankle. With one ankle free, she-

bee-BOOM.

The world falling beneath her, Audrey Collins, of the Collins and Marcotte law firm, of the Collins and Marcotte Tower, follows suit.

At least, partly.

With one ankle still shackled to the roof when the charges go off, her left leg is ripped off at the hip by gravity itself. With everything going blurry before she can feel the shards of glass cut open her arms, her face, and her tailored suit, before she hits the ground, she sees each story of her building pass by as if she were floating to the ground, and not regrettably waterfalling. There goes the top floor, with her name written on the door. While passing rented space after rented space, and with her blood tracing her path once again (but this time the path is less like finger paint and more like skywriting), she can see with perfect clarity her wonderful assistant, Tanya Moore, without whom she couldn’t function from day to day. She’s thankful, one last time, and Audrey Collins’ last thought is that she hopes that everyone got out.

THUMPTHUMPTHUMPTHU-

Her eyes are shut before she hits the ground.

Stephen
05-26-2009, 06:20 PM
Wow, that was really good. I'd like to see that as an actual Saw trap.

The Trapmaster
05-27-2009, 01:49 PM
I had an idea for the "High Rise" Trap, sort of. I think I posted in the Saw III thread, but whatever.

Basically, there was a guy trapped in an elevator shaft, with a harness around him. There were strings of barbed wire all around him, and he had to climb to the top where the doors to freedom were open. If he didn't make it in time, his harness would be released, and weights attached to it would cause him to fall to the bottom of the elevator shaft, where a bunch of pikes would impale him.

xGameOverx
05-27-2009, 02:37 PM
Something to do with a high screeching sound.
Sound based trap seems ace.
They have to cut off their ears to escape the trap.

The_Propmaker
05-27-2009, 07:33 PM
With Jigsaw you have to think that all of his traps were mechanical, My thoughts for a trap would involve a person in a metal box with two walls slowly moving towards them.
My other idea would be the hangmans noose, a person with a noose around thier neck and thier feet stuck to the floor, pop goes the head.

BuzzSaw
05-28-2009, 08:40 AM
My thoughts for a trap would involve a person in a metal box with two walls slowly moving towards them.

this one i think would be really effective. in fact, i know of a guy who can vouch for that... think his name was strahm.

The Trapmaster
05-28-2009, 02:43 PM
Something to do with a high screeching sound.
Sound based trap seems ace.
They have to cut off their ears to escape the trap.

That seems a little to high-tech for Jigsaw. It sort of reminds me of that movie "Cube" though.

The Trapmaster
05-28-2009, 02:46 PM
With Jigsaw you have to think that all of his traps were mechanical, My thoughts for a trap would involve a person in a metal box with two walls slowly moving towards them.
My other idea would be the hangmans noose, a person with a noose around thier neck and thier feet stuck to the floor, pop goes the head.

I had an idea for a hangman's noose trap too. Here's sort of how it went:

A guy has a collar locked around his neck, with a long cable, connected to this big arm, which is locked to the wall. The ground is covered with broken glass/nails/whatever. The guy has to pull his way across the room to find a key somehow, otherwise, when times up- the crane will yank upwards, pull in the cord, and the guy will be left dangling from the ceiling.

BlackOut0189
06-01-2009, 11:19 AM
Wait,you can edit posts

...Are you serious?

http://www.yes-press.com/yes.intro.jpg

->ReverseBearTrap<-
06-01-2009, 11:28 AM
...Are you serious?

http://www.yes-press.com/yes.intro.jpg
meh ima newbie so back th fuck off

BuzzSaw
06-01-2009, 11:39 AM
meh ima newbie so back th fuck off
yes sir mr hoffman sir.

The_Propmaker
06-01-2009, 12:16 PM
Thanks Trapmaster that makes the trap sound real good.

I Won The Game
06-01-2009, 12:25 PM
The Crushing Gears
An armed robber must bid "a farewell to arms." Two gears are stacked on top of each other in an indent on a wall. Behind the space where the gears meet is a switch. When the switch is pulled, the door is unlocked. The robber has two minutes to crush his arm or the switch is rendered useless.

Tape: Hello, Reuben. Over the past few months you've committed a string of armed robberies, evading justice...until now. I want to play a game, Reuben, and to win the game you must bid a farewell to arms. Behind the gears is a switch that will unlock the door. But be quick. In two minutes the door will seal shut. Will you evade justice once more?

~

Treadmill Noose I

A murderer who tries to "run away from his guilt" is placed on a treadmill. A noose is wrapped around his neck and the noose is placed on a track hanging from the ceiling. Behind the treadmill is a small pit just small enough to hang him if he falls. In forty minutes, the treadmill stops.

Tape: Hello, Colten. Since you murdered James Hogarth, you've been trying to run away from the guilt that haunts you. The question is, can you run away from death? In forty minutes, this treadmill will stop, but I'd be more worried about the noose wrapped around your neck. Don't stop running, Colten."

~

Treadmill Noose II

A steroid-abusing athlete is placed on a treadmill. It's pretty much the same as before, only the track is gone. The noose, which is now much longer, is tied to an anvil which rests on a platform above a tank of acidic water. The noose now has a lock. The key is dangling from a wire. When the wire is pulled, the platform descends a few feet.

Tape: Hello, Noah. I want to play a game. We've all heard that cheaters never win. Are you the exception to the rule? You've been illegally and immorally using chemicals to further your victories. Now you have to play a game with no chemicals to help you. To release yourself, all you have to do is grab the key in front of you. It'll come at a cost, though. Let the game begin!"

John Kramer For President
06-02-2009, 09:57 AM
Well... it's a thread that has to be made every year! Let's see what cool trap ideas you guys have this year :D


I was thinking of using something like a meat slicer. Think of a person like Ivan, think of what he did. Now change the woman to children and BOOM, thats worse. What would be his punishment? He himself would have to stick each hand threw a meat slicer. Almost in a way Cecil had to put enough presssure on the knives to get free. Put eough pressure on the blades to break free. I dont know about you, but I have to use a meat slicer at work...and im damn scared of it!

BuzzSaw
06-02-2009, 10:21 AM
I was thinking of using something like a meat slicer. Think of a person like Ivan, think of what he did. Now change the woman to children and BOOM, thats worse. What would be his punishment? He himself would have to stick each hand threw a meat slicer. Almost in a way Cecil had to put enough presssure on the knives to get free. Put eough pressure on the blades to break free. I dont know about you, but I have to use a meat slicer at work...and im damn scared of it!

well its a good idea, but you cant really keep other traps in mind when you come up with one. that automatically makes yours less than original.

but yeah, meat slicers are all sixes and sevens.

but at the same time, ultimately, what makes a meat slicer blade any different from a radial saw? not much... thats just where the originality has to come from.

apple
06-02-2009, 10:54 AM
Eckel wakes up in a brown room with his left hand attached to a chain attached to a wall. "hey get me out of here, please?!"

Just then Marco wakes up lying down in a room with a chains attached to both his arms and legs and they are attached to metal rings attached to the wall and there are locks on each ring. "are you kidding me? is this a joke?" He looks up and sees an opening in the ceiling. Eckel is trying to break free but cant and just then sees a tape recorder. He is sweating and bangs against the wall once more and sais, " maybe its a clue, but this is fucking bullshit." as he finishes his sentence, someone else who is on the opposite side of the room wakes up, but has no chains on him. "cough, ugh ahh, shit where am i" "who are you?" "I'm Teo, and you are??" "Eckel" "Eckel? Hah thats a fucking dumb name ha-ha." Teo walks up to Eckel and Eckel grabs him and throws him against the wall. "Listen you fuck, don't mess with me and you better know what the fuck is going on?" " i just woke up and the last thing i remember is a drug deal going awry. and my friend Marco was kidnapped. Play the tape man." "alright". Eckel presses play.

"Hello gentlemen i want to play a game. Eckel you are a innocent man, but with an obsession of rape and greed." Teo looks at him with disgust. "you are trapped in what i like to call the sand tomb trap. Eckel and Teo in the next room is Marco, sadly he is helpless as he is chained on all fours and sand will start pouring on him and eventually the whole room will be full of sand. Thats were you both come in. Teo you are a drug dealer and this trap is designed to change you and Eckel's ways." Eckel looks at him in disgust. "Teo, you can simply walk out of this room and take the next left and leave without helping Marco or Eckel, but take my warning as it is not wise to leave both of them. The brick that the chain is attached to is loose and so is the chain and with both of your strength can break the chain free, get the next clue and save Marco. LET THE GAME BEGIN."


"Shit lets get this chain off" they both pull and it does come off. "Theres the broken brick." "Eckel go check it out." He sees a note and it has a knife and it sais cut deeply into the leg. "Hell no am i doing that" "Eckel its for Marco" "i dont give a fuck about him i'm leaving." You herd the tape its not a good idea." "fuck off" He starts to leave when he hears screaming. the sand has started to fill Marco's cell. "shit we have to save him." "go go go," they both run to the room but its locked. "we have to cut into your leg." "fine." he starts to cut into his leg but quits "i see the key, let me pull it out." "go ahead shit face." He pulls out the key and unlocks the room. "Marco hold on
i'll unlock the locks, Eckel help me. Eckel?" Eckel had run out the room and tried to exit but it did not turn out so well because he set off a device and Marco and Teo are trapped in the room. "You fuck tard, i trusted you, im going to fucking kill you you shit face, cock sucker, fuck you." Ekcel flips him off and stands in the doorway and watches Marco and Teo's fate. Teo unlocks the chains and they both start banging on the door. "Fuck you asshole, your a dick." shutup Marco its useless." 5 minutes pass and the sand fill the room and Marco and Teo die.

Eckel tries to exit the room but the door is locked and there is a tape recorder. he presses play

"Hello Eckel this tape was meant to be for Teo but i figured before i start the trap that you would be the greedy one and if you are hearing this then that means you have failed to change your ways and you still let the lust of greed take you over. This place will become your tomb. GAME OVER ECKEL." "No fucking shit, help, somebody help me." he sees a revolver with 1 bullet in the chamber.

he goes to sit against the wall and thinks it through until he comes to a decision. he pulls the trigger.

WELL what do you guys and gals think?

The Trapmaster
06-02-2009, 04:01 PM
Thanks Trapmaster that makes the trap sound real good.

Welcome, though I don't know how I helped.

PS- Cool username, Propmaker :P

GodlessGOD
06-02-2009, 04:38 PM
The Rebirth Trap

( Special thanks to : THE THING ) giving me the idea of Hoffman and the bear trap.

This one is one of my personal favorite traps i imagined

Its leads back to the crushing room a man in the middle of the room bind to a chair the camera turns its Hoffman but on his head is the reverse bear trap. As he moves his head trying to get out of the chair which he is bind to the timer starts and slowly the walls are closing in on him. But he looks there is a door so he can get the bear trap out and quickly run and get out of the room.

(If he survives)

He finds a tape and plays it "Hello and welcome Detective Hoffman. From birth you have been given. The advantages a few others. Yet through poor moral decisions. You used these advantages to selfishly further only yourself at the expense of others. Well today the singular way will be put to the test. Have you learned enough to Rehabilitate yourself. Or to hear my warning and though if you do not. You will not make it alive you will simply fall and my legacy will become yours. In choosing how to react to this situation your life long instincts will tell you one thing but i employ you to do the opposite... Make Your Choice

Brandi
06-03-2009, 04:45 PM
I have a trap story idea that is very simple but I think it could be SOMEWHAT original and interesting... I doubt it would ever be featured on a future Saw film.

The film would start off with a man waking up in the middle of a small dark room with a television set up across from him. He has a neck device around his neck looking similar to the neck tie devices worn by the group in Saw V.

Then Jigsaw would then pop on the screen and tell him how he lived his life not bothering to place himself into situations where he could help people during devastating circumstances.

Jigsaw then reveals that there are 3-5 other people in the entire building "in need of desperate help" (meaning that they need help getting out of their traps). He then tells him that he must try and successfully save every single one of the victims within an hour or all will die, including him.

The neck tie is a device that would cause the man to be pulled forward, causing his neck to be broken. Also, when Jigsaw says to successfully assist all of the victims, he literally means ALL of them, meaning that this man has to go through a person's trap and find ways to help them get out of it... and if that person fails, he dies as well because the neck device would kill him after the person loses the trap.

Just something I've been thinking up for awhile.

->ReverseBearTrap<-
06-05-2009, 02:37 PM
yes sir mr hoffman sir.
What the fuck?

The Trapmaster
06-05-2009, 03:30 PM
When David Hackl said about that photo way back when that it would be the "most memorable" trap of Saw VI, I sort of had two ideas for it. They both sort of involved a "gateway" to freedom.

1) The trap would be sort of large vaulted door. The door had a series of large locks that had to be moved into place for the door to open, sort of like a big puzzle. In order to unlock a piece to move into place, there is this big, guillotine-style machine beside it. Underneath is a blender, with a large scale would have to be tipped by a certain amount of weight. In order to move a piece of the lock, someone would have to stick and arm, leg, hand or head into the guillotine, have it cut off, grinded and used as ballast to open the locks.
There would be about 3 people involved in this one. The theme of it would be "how much are you willing to sacrifice to save another?". Because, they could use one person, and open all the locks up, or they could each give a piece of themselves to open it.


2) The trap would be a large vaulted door. It would have to be opened by a series of sliding locks. A person would be strapped to it, with hooks from the sliding locks attached to parts of their body. When each lock would slide open, the part of the person that it was attached to would be "degloved". The trap would end with the person's face being degloved. The people involved in the trap could choose to let the one person die to open the door to their freedom; or somehow they could stop the trap, save the person and be locked in there, having to find another way out.

I Won The Game
06-05-2009, 03:36 PM
When David Hackl said about that photo way back when that it would be the "most memorable" trap of Saw VI, I sort of had two ideas for it. They both sort of involved a "gateway" to freedom.

1) The trap would be sort of large vaulted door. The door had a series of large locks that had to be moved into place for the door to open, sort of like a big puzzle. In order to unlock a piece to move into place, there is this big, guillotine-style machine beside it. Underneath is a blender, with a large scale would have to be tipped by a certain amount of weight. In order to move a piece of the lock, someone would have to stick and arm, leg, hand or head into the guillotine, have it cut off, grinded and used as ballast to open the locks.
There would be about 3 people involved in this one. The theme of it would be "how much are you willing to sacrifice to save another?". Because, they could use one person, and open all the locks up, or they could each give a piece of themselves to open it.


2) The trap would be a large vaulted door. It would have to be opened by a series of sliding locks. A person would be strapped to it, with hooks from the sliding locks attached to parts of their body. When each lock would slide open, the part of the person that it was attached to would be "degloved". The trap would end with the person's face being degloved. The people involved in the trap could choose to let the one person die to open the door to their freedom; or somehow they could stop the trap, save the person and be locked in there, having to find another way out.

Do you mind if I write these out? I love both ideas but before I'd do it I'd want your permission.

The Trapmaster
06-05-2009, 05:21 PM
Do you mind if I write these out? I love both ideas but before I'd do it I'd want your permission.

Sure, go for it. Feel free to put your own twists/ideas to the story too. I haven't really figured out how they would escape for #2.

->ReverseBearTrap<-
06-06-2009, 01:08 PM
yes sir mr hoffman sir.
What the...

I Won The Game
06-06-2009, 07:12 PM
The light burns Brian Dunlap's eyes, but the worst part of waking up was the pain scattered throughout his body. He can see the mirror tacked to the ceiling, and he sees his body is liberally skewered with long, thick nails. He tries to scream but the sound fades out before it hangs in the air.

He's in a Jigsaw trap. He manages to grab the tape recorder with his right arm (the one not nailed) and press the play button.

"Hello, Brian," the voice of his death rasps, "For the past few years you've been only concerned with women. For someone so desperate to be in their company you don't seem to respect them. Your only concern is, as you put it, nailing them and abandoning them. It's time to escape this cycle, Brian. You have five minutes before this tunnel seals shuts forever. By the way, there are smoke bombs set to go off in two minutes. And I'd be careful about the puddles of acid..." The voice fades off, and Brian actually manages to scream.

But no one comes for help.

He uses his right arm to rip out the nail in his left arm. With both his arms free, he yanks out the four nails in his stomach. Then the ones in his ankles. He becomes numb to the pain but knows it is there, under the surface. He yanks out the line of nails in his legs. Then he slowly rises, the pain under the surface coming out, and he falls forward.

His face lands in an acid puddle, and above him the smoke bombs go off He quickly takes it out, his face burning at the pain - a much different kind, and to think there CAN be a different kind - and his eyesight much blurrier, almost to the point of blindless. His mouth has literally been decimated from the inside out. Brian pauses, then rises.

He manages to run, survival the only thing on his mind. He suddenly feels dizziness encroach him. He begins to waddle into a acid puddle, the thick skin of his feet being eaten at. Brian doesn't care. He laughs from insanity when he hears a sound that must be the tunnel slamming shut.

(stolen from a short story)

rbcoasterfreak
06-10-2009, 06:54 PM
Hey, didn't want to sift through 13 pages of trap ideas to find an answer. lol

Has is been officially announced how MANY traps will be in VI?

ribcaged
06-10-2009, 07:04 PM
Hey, didn't want to sift through 13 pages of trap ideas to find an answer. lol

Has is been officially announced how MANY traps will be in VI?
Nope. All we know is that there will be a Steam Trap and a Carousel Trap.

Oh, and the shoop in your avi is inferior.

The Trapmaster
06-11-2009, 08:19 AM
Hey, didn't want to sift through 13 pages of trap ideas to find an answer. lol

Has is been officially announced how MANY traps will be in VI?

I'd assume 7, just like all the other films in the series. But that's just a guess.

Oddric
06-11-2009, 01:37 PM
*Chuckle*

I'm refraining from looking at these so I'm not tempted to put them in my Saw Fic...

...But no one would care if I looked through and edited them up a bit, right?

JillEsterNapier91
06-11-2009, 07:58 PM
I actually mailed a letter to Leigh Whannell of "Games" I thought of to put in films. Though I higly doubt he got them.

An abusive woman wakes up in a games were her wrist & ankles have that nylon string that if you touch it causes it to bleed. As she looks she sees in front of her she sees daggers pointed, not at her eyes, but at her mouth. Suddenly, Billy the puppet appears on a tv telling her that her abuse as a way of controlling has been destroying her husband and children.

And the only way she can get out is by sticking her hands a machine that would smash her bones like Seth's games. Only they where daggers in the machine to pierce through her hands.

But if she didn't do it in a minute. Her wrist and ankles will be slit and the knives would plundge into her mouth and pull through the sides of her mouth. Resulting in a permanent smile.

What do you think? Good or bad reviews will be appreciated. :D

Piticus
06-12-2009, 08:45 AM
I have always wanted to see a trap that includes denailing.
Something with lung inflation would be nice, too. You know the feeling you get when you're blowing up a balloon and you get some of the air back? Yeep

BuzzSaw
06-12-2009, 09:08 AM
*Chuckle*

I'm refraining from looking at these so I'm not tempted to put them in my Saw Fic...

...But no one would care if I looked through and edited them up a bit, right?

let me guess.... youre a writer? we dont have a whole lot of those round these parts.

BuzzSaw
06-12-2009, 09:09 AM
I actually mailed a letter to Leigh Whannell of "Games" I thought of to put in films. Though I higly doubt he got them.

An abusive woman wakes up in a games were her wrist & ankles have that nylon string that if you touch it causes it to bleed. As she looks she sees in front of her she sees daggers pointed, not at her eyes, but at her mouth. Suddenly, Billy the puppet appears on a tv telling her that her abuse as a way of controlling has been destroying her husband and children.

And the only way she can get out is by sticking her hands a machine that would smash her bones like Seth's games. Only they where daggers in the machine to pierce through her hands.

But if she didn't do it in a minute. Her wrist and ankles will be slit and the knives would plundge into her mouth and pull through the sides of her mouth. Resulting in a permanent smile.

What do you think? Good or bad reviews will be appreciated. :D


this has too many things that happened in other games:

nylon strings that cut flesh upon movement: cecil-ish
crush her own hands: seth
permanent smile: amanda

jigsaw11korn
06-12-2009, 10:02 AM
The vice trap

The victim wakes up in a chair like trap. There are vices on his knees and on his head.

The trap would be very simple. The vices would be connected to chains. These chains are all hooked to the vices. The chains and there slack in the chains would decide how much each vice would close. On his knee caps there are cranks to the vices. The victim must crank all the slack out of the chain on his knees so that in one minute the trap doesn’t tighten on his head. Yes there legs would be totally destroyed but his head would not be damaged.





Vacuum trap

This trap is also very simple. The victim will have a vacuum tube attached to a mask that is chained on to there head. In one minute the vacuum will turn on and collapse there lungs. I’m not sure yet how they would get out.








Bulimic trap

This trap will be very ironic. The person would wake up in a small room. Attached to there is head is a head trap. It would have to jagged pieces of metal located rite in front of her eyes. In 2 minutes the to jagged pieces of metal will be stabbed in her eyes. And they twist side ways.

The only way out is to crawl in to a very small tunnel. Even way to small for her to fit. In the tape it would tell her that the only way to get the key is to crawl down the tunnel and get the key at the end. But of course she would realize she is to big to fit. So the tape would tell her that she must remove all this so called fat away from her body. But of course when she begins to cut she hits bone and realizes she must remove more than just fat.








Weight trap

In this trap a victim would wake up in a similar design trap as the rack. But they are laid side ways as if lying on a table. There limbs hanging off the edges. All the limbs but his left leg is hooked to a chain and his right arm which is free. The leg is bent under him. The chain hooked to his leg runs up to a ply system and he must hold down a button with his hand until his leg breaks. When his leg break the slack in the chain will let a key lower down to him. And he will be free. But if he doesn’t do this in one minute there would be weight applied to the rest of his limbs hanging of the table until they are broken. This would include first is eft arm, then rite leg, and then final his neck.

BuzzSaw
06-12-2009, 11:04 AM
The vices would be connected to chains. These chains are all hooked to the vices

oh, really?

Bulimic trap
But of course when she begins to cut she hits bone and realizes she must remove more than just fat.

bulimic people arent necessarily fat. theyre really skinny. they eat for the sake of the nutrients cuz like, ya know, you have to eat, right? and then regurgitate it back up so they dont gain weight. so it wouldnt really work if she had to carve off her fat, cuz she really wouldnt have any.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0EAzHAnWCVw heres a video that explains it all...........

gotta go with the vice trap here. i like the idea of having to give slack to something that will do damage to vital parts by damaging something else non-vital via removing slack. good balancing skills there. i dont really see how the vices fit into the slack thing, but vices in general are a good idea too.

Oddric
06-12-2009, 02:43 PM
let me guess.... youre a writer? we dont have a whole lot of those round these parts.

Yeah. Actually, my Saw fanfic has already hit 17 chapters and will be going for another 25 to 30, at least.

I don't like bragging...but I can honestly say my fanfic is the closest thing (better than the later movies, so says some of my reviewers) to the Saw movies that they've ever seen.

...I fully proofread and use great grammar. So it's not a horror show of the literature variety. zD

*Points to sig, if anyone's interested*

But yeah, no one would mind if I played around with some dieas here, right? I got a lot of traps to use soon and I wouldn't mind some nudging.

BuzzSaw
06-12-2009, 03:32 PM
Yeah. Actually, my Saw fanfic has already hit 17 chapters and will be going for another 25 to 30, at least.

I don't like bragging...but I can honestly say my fanfic is the closest thing (better than the later movies, so says some of my reviewers) to the Saw movies that they've ever seen.

...I fully proofread and use great grammar. So it's not a horror show of the literature variety. zD

*Points to sig, if anyone's interested*

But yeah, no one would mind if I played around with some dieas here, right? I got a lot of traps to use soon and I wouldn't mind some nudging.

dont mean to be so straight forward about it, but i was being sarcastic. everyone on here has nominated themselves as a writer. no one really minds; they kind of just start out as fans and want to get involved in that way. its a little different for someone to come on in and sort of announce it in a roundabout way.

welcome, though!

i personally get kind of frustrated with people who ask to "edit them up a bit", followed by stating "i don't mean to brag". just a personal issue of mine. i knew someone who used to do things like that. a lot. he was an artist, a pretty good one too, but he kind of nominated himself as the best around and offered people lessons and instructions and stuff. really pissed me off. he would do this to me as well, and i hold my own on the sketchpad just fine.

ANYWAY. nothin personal dude. just wanted to check out what it was all about. you may find that most dont mind you including their ideas, probably so long as you deliver credit where its due. that goes for me. i plan on making a series of "saw shorts" as i call them. all they are, are a bunch of saw traps that conclude within themselves, with twists and such.

blah. okay im done. :) have a nice stay.

Oddric
06-12-2009, 03:48 PM
D;

That's sorta why I didn't want to go searching through the traps. I didn't want to accidentally steal anything...and I do like doing things on my own.

I think I'll just stick to that.

Didn't catch the internet sarcasm, I figured almost no one had Saw fics so I believed your statement...my bad.

When you say, 'Saw Shorts' do you mean stories or videos? Regardless I'd love to see them! I haven't bothered reading any other fics in fear I'd do a trap or something and be like 'crap, didn't that guy do it in his fic?' and stray away from it.

But, any good Saw fic needs those twists at the end to be truly satisfactory!

Thanks. ;D

The Trapmaster
06-12-2009, 05:14 PM
*Chuckle*

I'm refraining from looking at these so I'm not tempted to put them in my Saw Fic...

...But no one would care if I looked through and edited them up a bit, right?

If you're planning on using some of people's traps, make sure to ask their permission first.

jigsaw11korn
06-13-2009, 10:48 AM
oh, really?



bulimic people arent necessarily fat. theyre really skinny. they eat for the sake of the nutrients cuz like, ya know, you have to eat, right? and then regurgitate it back up so they dont gain wait. so it wouldnt really work if she had to carve off her fat, cuz she really wouldnt have any.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0EAzHAnWCVw heres a video that explains it all............


That is what I was saying. The irony is that she has no fat and that once she starts cutting away skin she would relize this and as well relize here problem.

BuzzSaw
06-13-2009, 10:52 AM
D;

That's sorta why I didn't want to go searching through the traps. I didn't want to accidentally steal anything...and I do like doing things on my own.

I think I'll just stick to that.

Didn't catch the internet sarcasm, I figured almost no one had Saw fics so I believed your statement...my bad.

When you say, 'Saw Shorts' do you mean stories or videos? Regardless I'd love to see them! I haven't bothered reading any other fics in fear I'd do a trap or something and be like 'crap, didn't that guy do it in his fic?' and stray away from it.

But, any good Saw fic needs those twists at the end to be truly satisfactory!

Thanks. ;D

saw short... i dont really know if i can explain it... its just a trap story with a twist and concludes as a stroy within itself. its all written. the scenes arent supposed to be attached to any cop, any movie, or any other scene or character. mainly just john/hoffman and the characters involved in them. ive only written one, and if i can find it ill send it to you.

I Won The Game
06-20-2009, 04:38 PM
I'd like to see a death by heat. Not fire, but heat. Any ideas, people?

BuzzSaw
06-21-2009, 09:54 AM
I'd like to see a death by heat. Not fire, but heat. Any ideas, people?

every once in a while i try to mentally work something out where a guy has to dig through rapidly-heating coals. i think that might work per your criteria.

jigsaw11korn
06-21-2009, 03:22 PM
I'd like to see a death by heat. Not fire, but heat. Any ideas, people?
I had an idea for a trap like this. A guy would wake up in a solid metal box. The box would have heating devices on the out side. And he would basicly be cooked to death if he didnt excape. That is all Ive got for that now.

thepl4gue
06-21-2009, 03:57 PM
I have a trap story idea that is very simple but I think it could be SOMEWHAT original and interesting... I doubt it would ever be featured on a future Saw film.

The film would start off with a man waking up in the middle of a small dark room with a television set up across from him. He has a neck device around his neck looking similar to the neck tie devices worn by the group in Saw V.

Then Jigsaw would then pop on the screen and tell him how he lived his life not bothering to place himself into situations where he could help people during devastating circumstances.

Jigsaw then reveals that there are 3-5 other people in the entire building "in need of desperate help" (meaning that they need help getting out of their traps). He then tells him that he must try and successfully save every single one of the victims within an hour or all will die, including him.

The neck tie is a device that would cause the man to be pulled forward, causing his neck to be broken. Also, when Jigsaw says to successfully assist all of the victims, he literally means ALL of them, meaning that this man has to go through a person's trap and find ways to help them get out of it... and if that person fails, he dies as well because the neck device would kill him after the person loses the trap.

Just something I've been thinking up for awhile.

That's good Brandi, but I think with a few tweaks it'd be better. Here's my two cents.

- The people the man can save are people that have wronged him in life (stolen, cheated, etc.) but never done anything bad like murder. He can choose whether to save them or not.

- At the end, the more people he has with them, the easier it is to get out. (Think of the arm trap in Saw V, if everyone lived they would've needed only a bit of blood from each person, rather than half the blood of two people).

Just my idea. I'd like to see a heat trap like someone else said, but they mentioned a steam room in Saw VI so maybe we'll get to see it.

The Trapmaster
06-21-2009, 04:38 PM
I'd like to see a death by heat. Not fire, but heat. Any ideas, people?

Heat Trap- A man is locked to a metal platform with holes in the bottom of it. Underneath the platform burns a big furnace, with the heat rising up to meet the platform. The platform is attached to a large lowering system which is continously lowering toward the furnace at intervals. He would eventually die from the burning heat of the furnace.
Another man is up on an observation platform, and he has the power to stop the lowering platform, and bring it back up to safety.

Not really sure how that would work out, and I want to expand on it a little bit.

I Won The Game
06-21-2009, 05:19 PM
Heat Trap- A man is locked to a metal platform with holes in the bottom of it. Underneath the platform burns a big furnace, with the heat rising up to meet the platform. The platform is attached to a large lowering system which is continously lowering toward the furnace at intervals. He would eventually die from the burning heat of the furnace.
Another man is up on an observation platform, and he has the power to stop the lowering platform, and bring it back up to safety.

Not really sure how that would work out, and I want to expand on it a little bit.

Trapmaster: If you like the idea I pitched, we could DEFINITELY use this for Marlon, Sam, or Chloe.

By the way, what did you guys think of my Smoke Tunnel?

Mr. Briggs Inc.
06-21-2009, 05:33 PM
The light burns Brian Dunlap's eyes, but the worst part of waking up was the pain scattered throughout his body. He can see the mirror tacked to the ceiling, and he sees his body is liberally skewered with long, thick nails. He tries to scream but the sound fades out before it hangs in the air.

He's in a Jigsaw trap. He manages to grab the tape recorder with his right arm (the one not nailed) and press the play button.

"Hello, Brian," the voice of his death rasps, "For the past few years you've been only concerned with women. For someone so desperate to be in their company you don't seem to respect them. Your only concern is, as you put it, nailing them and abandoning them. It's time to escape this cycle, Brian. You have five minutes before this tunnel seals shuts forever. By the way, there are smoke bombs set to go off in two minutes. And I'd be careful about the puddles of acid..." The voice fades off, and Brian actually manages to scream.

But no one comes for help.

He uses his right arm to rip out the nail in his left arm. With both his arms free, he yanks out the four nails in his stomach. Then the ones in his ankles. He becomes numb to the pain but knows it is there, under the surface. He yanks out the line of nails in his legs. Then he slowly rises, the pain under the surface coming out, and he falls forward.

His face lands in an acid puddle, and above him the smoke bombs go off He quickly takes it out, his face burning at the pain - a much different kind, and to think there CAN be a different kind - and his eyesight much blurrier, almost to the point of blindless. His mouth has literally been decimated from the inside out. Brian pauses, then rises.

He manages to run, survival the only thing on his mind. He suddenly feels dizziness encroach him. He begins to waddle into a acid puddle, the thick skin of his feet being eaten at. Brian doesn't care. He laughs from insanity when he hears a sound that must be the tunnel slamming shut.

(stolen from a short story)
Okay, I like some ideas here. My thoughts:

*The acid is a bit much, seems gratuitous.
*There shouldn't be a door in the tunnel itself, a better challenge IMO would be to get out of a slowly thinning tunnel (Maybe with sharp edges) before the smoke suffocates him or something. With something like that the nail angle could pretty much be taken out altogether, and a new backstory could be used.

There Will Be Blood
06-21-2009, 10:29 PM
I hope that there's a cool opening trap like the Reverse Bear Trap, or the Venus Fly Trap.

The Trapmaster
06-22-2009, 07:39 AM
Trapmaster: If you like the idea I pitched, we could DEFINITELY use this for Marlon, Sam, or Chloe.

By the way, what did you guys think of my Smoke Tunnel?

I was thinking about that actually. I've got a couple of ideas in mind, I'll e-mail them to you.

The Smoke Tunnel is cool, but I think that the acid could be taken out. It seems a little bit... overkill for some reason.

Jashin
07-14-2009, 07:16 AM
what about something similar to Erick's trap in IV, but it's resembles more of a bear trap and once it falls, it slices through the abdoman?

FrozenWorm
07-14-2009, 08:57 AM
A guy who is conected to a tube on his mouth and forced to drink water until his belly explodes, he has to stab himself in order to make holes in his stomatch for the water to have a place to escape...

JunKing87
07-14-2009, 08:17 PM
A guy who is conected to a tube on his mouth and forced to drink water until his belly explodes, he has to stab himself in order to make holes in his stomatch for the water to have a place to escape...

While that idea is SCARY, I think it might be too similar to Strahm's water box trap, with the whole having to stab yourself to release the water. What if there are multiple tubes near him, one down his throat. And one by one, the tubes activate and he has to use them to pour a certain amount of water into something to get a key. It he doesn't get it in time, the tube down his throat will activate and his stomach will explode like you said.

It's creepy, I once read someplace that some evil guy way back when used to tie string around the victim's penis so that they couldn't pee. He would then continue to make them drink as much as possible and stab them in the stomach so that he could watch it pour out. Nasty!

I have a few for a prequel story I posted here but I haven't been able to write it for awhile. Might as well just post some of the other traps I was planning to use.

1) The main character is stuck in a straitjacket and is forced into a room with another man. This man is a drug dealer and was responsible for getting his brother addicted. So now he has to choose to either work with him so they both survive, or get his revenge by taking him out and escaping afterwards. They are both in a long, wide room where cement blocks are suspended by chains on the ceiling.

Every inch of the ceiling is covered with these blocks and if they don't find a way out soon, the blocks will drop and they will be crushed to death. It turns out there is a remote with two buttons on it. One sets a one minute timer till the blocks are released, the other opens the door to escape.

Problem is, you can only activate the door button by releasing the timer. So pretty much, the drug dealer ends up activating the trap and the two struggle with each other. After the door switch is set, the main character knocks the drug dealer over and escapes while all the blocks collapse from the ceiling, killing the dealer instantly. The point of the trap is to symbolize, 'crumbling under pressure' which is something the main character always does.

2) This one I haven't thought out too well yet, but what about a trap that involved some sort of vacuum? No not a vacuum cleaner lol, but a room where if the victim doesn't complete their task in time, the air will be sucked from the room and they will suffocate?

Anyways, I like some of the traps I've been reading here, especially some of the ones mentioned above. Trapmaster, I really like your heat trap idea as well with the lowering platform. It sounds suspenseful and something that would really f' up the victim if they fail!

followyourheart
07-15-2009, 01:06 PM
A woman named Stacy wakes up in a room with three concrete walls and one wooden wall. There are three holes in the wooden wall, and a handwritten note:

"One will teach you a lesson.
One is the tool to your freedom.
One is the key to your freedom."

Stacy tries all the holes. She begins with the middle one, and feels nothing but a solid metal wall.

Then she tries the hole to the left. Its bottom is covered by soft fur.

Finally, she puts her arm into the hole on the right - SMACK! Her right hand got caught in a bear trap! Stacy screams in surprise and agony.

After the trap slams shut, a note comes out: "A fur is just a cover."
Sobbing and bleeding, she realises she must search the fur hole again, and she has to stretch far to the left to be able to reach the fur hole. This creates enormous pain in her trapped right arm.

Stacy feels her way around inside of the fur hole, and she feels some kind of edge; it's a mat.
She lifts the fur mat, and finds a solid, one-feet long object. She pulls it out of the hole - it's a skeleton bone.

After a few moments of frustration and hard thinking, she realises that she must use the bone to reach deeper into the hole. She uses the bone to fumble around, and she finally hears bone colliding with metal. Stacy gets excited, and carefully drags the bone towards her. With it comes a key.

Stacy begins to wonder if she didn't examine the middle hole (with the solid metal wall) good enough. She puts the key back into the fur hole, so that she can easily reach it, and then puts her left arm into the middle hole. Examining the wall with her fingertips, she feels a small keyhole.

Excited and hopeful, Stacy grabs the key from the fur hole, puts it inside the keyhole, and turns it around. The bear trap clicks open. She quickly removes her right arm. Then the entire wooden wall swings open - it was a door. Stacy walks out through a long, dark hallway, happy to be alive.

Jashin
07-16-2009, 09:41 AM
an explosive mask

molcoo
07-16-2009, 09:44 AM
an explosive mask
You mean a mask that explodes in your face? Nah, too similar to the Shotgun Collar.

Jashin
07-17-2009, 05:22 AM
yeh, i guess your right

molcoo
07-17-2009, 06:01 AM
yeh, i guess your right
I'm not trying to picky or anything, it's just that trap sounds way too similar to the Shotgun Collar (which fires bullets into your face and explodes).

Maxima
07-17-2009, 11:00 AM
what about something that involves deafening someone...to the point of death if possible?

apple
07-18-2009, 10:10 AM
its been awhile. buzzsaw anytrap ideas lately. what about tod?

light101dark
07-18-2009, 01:11 PM
A woman named Stacy wakes up in a room with three concrete walls and one wooden wall. There are three holes in the wooden wall, and a handwritten note:

"One will teach you a lesson.
One is the tool to your freedom.
One is the key to your freedom."

Stacy tries all the holes. She begins with the middle one, and feels nothing but a solid metal wall.

Then she tries the hole to the left. Its bottom is covered by soft fur.

Finally, she puts her arm into the hole on the right - SMACK! Her right hand got caught in a bear trap! Stacy screams in surprise and agony.

After the trap slams shut, a note comes out: "A fur is just a cover."
Sobbing and bleeding, she realises she must search the fur hole again, and she has to stretch far to the left to be able to reach the fur hole. This creates enormous pain in her trapped right arm.

Stacy feels her way around inside of the fur hole, and she feels some kind of edge; it's a mat.
She lifts the fur mat, and finds a solid, one-feet long object. She pulls it out of the hole - it's a skeleton bone.

After a few moments of frustration and hard thinking, she realises that she must use the bone to reach deeper into the hole. She uses the bone to fumble around, and she finally hears bone colliding with metal. Stacy gets excited, and carefully drags the bone towards her. With it comes a key.

Stacy begins to wonder if she didn't examine the middle hole (with the solid metal wall) good enough. She puts the key back into the fur hole, so that she can easily reach it, and then puts her left arm into the middle hole. Examining the wall with her fingertips, she feels a small keyhole.

Excited and hopeful, Stacy grabs the key from the fur hole, puts it inside the keyhole, and turns it around. The bear trap clicks open. She quickly removes her right arm. Then the entire wooden wall swings open - it was a door. Stacy walks out through a long, dark hallway, happy to be alive.
i like this a lot

Jashin
07-18-2009, 04:43 PM
I'm not trying to picky or anything, it's just that trap sounds way too similar to the Shotgun Collar (which fires bullets into your face and explodes).


don't worry, dude, i didn't take it like an offense its just that i really didn't think about that :)

DOJ
07-18-2009, 07:40 PM
I have my Saw traps right here for reading (http://www.angelfire.com/film/4hoh/sawtraps.html). Bear in mind I cut and pasted them from different times I wrote them, hence why some of them aren't as detailed or a bit disorganized at times.

Cudi_09
07-18-2009, 08:50 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UsVOF_ODIzY

This seems like a good moral overall but the trap....?

molcoo
07-19-2009, 05:27 AM
I have my Saw traps right here for reading (http://www.angelfire.com/film/4hoh/sawtraps.html). Bear in mind I cut and pasted them from different times I wrote them, hence why some of them aren't as detailed or a bit disorganized at times.
Interesting ideas, DOJ.

KillerZavatar
07-19-2009, 06:52 AM
I have my Saw traps right here for reading (http://www.angelfire.com/film/4hoh/sawtraps.html). Bear in mind I cut and pasted them from different times I wrote them, hence why some of them aren't as detailed or a bit disorganized at times.
lol wut

DOJ
07-22-2009, 04:36 PM
Thanks guys, my favorite of the traps I've done is the Bomb Mask and I also enjoyed writing the Hellcross.

KillerZavatar
07-22-2009, 04:39 PM
Thanks guys, my favorite of the traps I've done is the Bomb Mask and I also enjoyed writing the Hellcross.
. . .

DOJ
07-22-2009, 07:55 PM
Here's my Bomb Mask trap:


Bomb Mask - A young man in his late twenties or early thirties awoke sitting on a stool in a dark room, dimly illuminated by a light bulb hanging on the ceiling. He was shirtless but had jeans on. As his senses returned he felt something heavy and metal around his head and his vision was limited, he was staring out of two eyeholes. He stood up and felt terrible pain suddenly shooting through his body, he could feel the nerves picking up the pain receptors deep within his system and transferring the pain throughout the rest of him. He also felt like something was holding him back, limiting his movements. He groaned and hissed as he noticed a nearby mirror.

He looked into the mirror and saw that he was wearing some bizarre and frightening metal mask, with dark bronze coloration and appearing to be rusted and grimy. The mask somewhat resembled old robot heads seen in 1950s Science Fiction comic books, and the mask itself was held together by leather harness straps around his chest and back. He also noticed what was causing the terrible pain in his body: a series of multi-colored wires embedded in his skin and hooked to some black electronic device hooked into his lower back, on the tailbone. He screamed in pain and terror, his screams and cries muffled by the metal mask. Suddenly a nearby television set came to life with the image of a sinister psuedo-clown puppet that spoke to the young man in a deep, gravelly voice, Timothy turning to face it.

"Hello, Timothy. You don't know me... but I know you. I want to play a game, and the game I want to play is just like the game you've been playing, as a serial bomber. You're an angry man Timothy, you're angry at the world and at humanity and that's a feeling I know all too well, but you take your anger out on the wrong people, you've gotten innocent people caught in your crossfire. For some time already, you've been bombing homes, businesses, work offices and public property, causing chaos and destruction, and resulting in people losing their jobs, homes... and their lives. You were recently suspected of the series of bombings that's had your community in fear but you got off on lack of evidence... but I have others watching out for me and I know that you are indeed the Mad Bomber, all of the evidence uncovered points to you. You don't realize the magnitude of what you've done, Timothy, people have lost their jobs, homes and lives because of you and are struggling to survive on the streets, and others have lost people they care about that they'll never see again. Now you'll prove to me if you're worthy of redemption... redemption you don't deserve."

Timothy watched on in horror, his frantic breathing muffled by the mask.

"The device you're wearing is a Bomb Mask. Inside the mask is a time bomb. When the spring cable connected to the mask is pulled, the timer on your lower back will activate and you'll be given two minutes to defuse the bomb. If you do not defuse the bomb in time, it will explode and kill you. The mask cannot be removed and can only be removed once the timer ends and the opening mechanism activates... if the bomb has been defused by then. You can defuse it by using the wire cutters I've given you to snip the wires, but be careful which wires you cut. Snip the wires in the order of the rainbow to successfully defuse the bomb, but if you do not cut the wires in the correct color-coded order, the bomb will prematurely detonate. If you've managed to defuse the bomb in time when the timer ends, the mask will open and you'll be free. Life isn't about hating and destroying, Timothy... it's about living. Live or die... make your choice."

The television screen went blank. Timothy was wracked with fear over what he had learned. He gathered his composure together and bracing himself, pushed forward as hard as he could, feeling the spring cable loosen and pull off, and he could hear an electronic ticking sound coming from the timer embedded in his skin below his lower back, meaning the timer was now activated. Timothy looked around a little while for the wire cutters and eventually found a small bronze metal box near the television set. He crouched down beside it and opened it, inside were the wire cutters and he immediately removed them. He was frantic and shouting, a minute had already passed and Timothy still not having snipped a single wire, his shouts and pleas muffled by the mask.

He looked down to see the bloody wires embedded and tangled throughout his skin. He had to move very carefully since one wrong move could prematurely detonate the bomb within the mask. He then looked into the mirror to help guide himself and finally decided to try snipping the wires in the correct color sequence of the rainbow, from what he could remember. He snipped the red wire first, nothing happened, meaning he had snipped the correct first color-coded wire. He then snipped the orange wire wire, again nothing. He debated with himself to cut the green or yellow wire next but chose to cut the yellow one first. He cut it, holding his breath, still no explosion.

He mentally debated on cutting the green or blue wire next, but chose the blue one. He cut the blue wire, when suddenly, he heard a locking sound, similar to a deadbolt lock being locked into place, and before he could shriek in panic and terror, the time bomb exploded inside the Bomb Mask. The mask and Timothy's head exploded into bloody fragments and chunks of metal, wires, flesh, blood, bone, brain matter and arterial spray as his life essence splattered all over the room, a smoldering and smoking stump where his head and neck used to be as well as parts of his shoulders. The skin and muscle looked blackened and charred from the heat and explosion. Timothy's headless body fell on it's knees for a moment before it fell to the ground, where it laid lifeless, smoking blood seeping out from the blackened stump onto the ground to form a puddle.

I Won The Game
07-23-2009, 07:54 AM
1

Graham woke up in his bedroom, feeling that something was wrong. As he rolled out of bed and showered and did all the other required morning rituals. After brushing his teeth, he opened the medicine cabinet. Something caught his eye - it was a tape recorder. He suddenly realized what was going on, and fear and rage exploded within him. He grabbed the tape recorder and pressed play.

"Hello, Graham. For the past few years you have lost yourself in a desperate quest to punish those you felt have ruined your life. Now, I am offering you two things: one, a chance to find yourself again, and two, a chance for revenge against the ones who have ruined your life. You may ignore this message and carry on with your pitiful life, or you may find yourself...reborn."

People's faces flashed throughout Graham's brain. People he want to harm, to kill. People who Graham had nightmares about. People who made Graham's life a nightmare.

Graham put on the deodorant and got dressed. In his closet was a piece of paper with an address written on it. It was the address of an abandoned aquarium.

It was a two-hour drive. Graham got a call from his son Marcus on his cellphone but he ignored it.

2

As Reid Molina woke up he knew something was wrong. For one, he was sitting up. For two, his vision was blurred over...then he realized his head was in a glass cube. He couldn't move his head, but as he struggled to, he heard a padlock jangling. A key dangled from a pipe - just out of reach.

On a table next to Reid was a screwdriver and a tape recorder. Reid grabbed the recorder and hefted it across the room.

Some time later, a man walked into the room. Reid recognized his former business partner, Graham Paxton. Reid flailed his arms and legs in a strange fury. Graham picked up the tape recorder and played it.

"Hello, Reid. I want to play a game. Destroying your own business may have brought you more money, but it took money from so many people who needed it - including your business partner. Now it's up to him to save you. Don't worry. If he refuses to do so, a tool has been given to you to save yourself. Help is on the way."

The screwdriver, Reid realized, as the cube began filling with ice-cold water that shocked his system. Reid's appendages flew in a frenzied panic as Graham grabbed the key from the string. He tossed it aside and walked away.

Reid began smashing the side of the cube, to no avail. He picked up the screwdriver and spitefully, stupidly, tossed it again. Seconds later regret filled him. And the water stopped flowing. He couldn't see. This was his fate - to drown, unsung, as a villain who destroyed lives.

The Trapmaster
09-19-2009, 10:00 AM
Even though Saw VI's Traps were determined a long time ago, I think it'd be a good idea to bump this thread to allow people to post some more ideas.

DOJ
09-19-2009, 12:52 PM
I'd love to see a trap involving a turbine engine for the next movie.

Vully5789
09-19-2009, 02:38 PM
I have an idea for a group trap. 5 people wake up in the bathroom from Saw I. They are all chained to a pipe in the room. There is a hacksaw next to each of them. There are nailbombs that will blow up in 15 minues and there is 1 door that leads to the next room. The key for each chain is in the center of the room but someone has to saw off there foot and crawl over to reach it. I know we wont want to see our beloved bathroom to be exploded but what do you all think?

The Trapmaster
09-19-2009, 02:50 PM
I'd love to see a trap involving a turbine engine for the next movie.

Since it's going to be in 3-D, you might just get your wish. Having human pieces splattering everywhere while being purreed would be a good 3D effect.

DOJ
09-19-2009, 07:58 PM
Since it's going to be in 3-D, you might just get your wish. Having human pieces splattering everywhere while being purreed would be a good 3D effect.


That would make for a cool 3D effect, but the trap itself can also be terrifying.

light101dark
09-20-2009, 06:10 AM
6 people are spun around on a roundabout with a gun pointed at them, with someone on the other end of the gun able to save 2 people.

sawaholic
09-21-2009, 05:52 PM
I love reading different trap ideas and making some up :) Here go's one of mine.

The dental hammer trap. ( Can not fit in Saw VI but just a random idea)

Hello Alexa I want to play a game! Your mouth has gotten many in a early grave. Your lies have gotten the innocent killed! You are a very hateful woman who has hired hit men to kill innocent men FOR WHAT!? Because they were not interested in a relationship with you? I do not blame them because you are a very heartless woman.

I think you have noticed that you cannot close your mouth and it is hard for you to swallow... that is because you have a lip and cheek retractor in your mouth exposing all of your teeth! And around your head is a head microphone type of device BUT instead of a microphone in front of your mouth it is a club hammer aimed for your teeth!

After 2 minutes is up the club hammer will release full speed and it has enough power to break out all of your teeth it will not only leave you in excruciating agony but you will be left to die.

You can survive though! There is a key that was surgically placed in your right shoulder and on the table are chisels,probes,and other sharp "normally dental" tools that you may use to cut into your skin to retrieve the key and remove the helmet off your head before the hammer slams your exposed teeth! The timer will start as soon as you get out of your chair and make your way to the surgical table therefor pulling the cord. Live or die make your choice.

Distraught Alexa immediately rushes towards the table with all of the sharp dental tools and the time started! 1:59,1:58,1:57.... She gets a instrument and begins cutting into her shoulder in random spots! She begins crying in pain and quickly realizes that this random cutting is getting her no where and wasting time! 1:01,1:00,0:59... She then closes her eyes and just digs into her skin peeling a layer of her shoulder skin completely off and things get really bloody she feels the small metal key and grabs it! She is in so much pain and has uncontrollable tears and it is also very hard for her to swallow since she has the lip retractor in her mouth! She ignores the pain and starts trying to unlock the helmet off her head but she can't seem to fit the key in! 20,19,18,17... She looks at the timer and begins to get impatient therefor trying to force the key in and ends up dropping it on the ground! She drops to her knees and begins to try to look for the key every where searching in panic! 9,8,7,6,5... She looks up at the timer and realizes that she has failed and lets out a huge cry/moan before... beep! beep! beep! SLAM!!!!!! The hammer strikes her mouth! many teeth fall on the floor like pieces of broken glass and blood pours out of her mouth as she just slumps over you hear her choking on her blood as her eyes just stare.... She finally dies.

Sorry for bad grammar lol I kind of rushed.

Gravemind
09-21-2009, 10:38 PM
I posted this in another thread but I thought I'd post it here too.

The Cleaver trap:

You are stuck in a room in a chair and your ankles are strapped to the chair legs with your arms free. There are two cleavers parallel to your ankles that will spring forward in 90 seconds and cut both of you feet off. In order to open the lock restraining your legs, you must tear out your teeth with your bare hands to find the lock combination written on the back of every one of your teeth.

KillerZavatar
09-22-2009, 02:30 AM
6 people are spun around on a roundabout with a gun pointed at them, with someone on the other end of the gun able to save 2 people.
haha thats what i wanted to write x)

sawaholic
09-22-2009, 11:34 AM
The Sawgasm trap lolz

A super saw fan who tries to avoid every possible spoiler so he/she can enjoy the movie on October 23rd finds themself strapped in an extremely uncomfortable chair! A chair so uncomfortable that after 5 minutes your butt is very very sore! Around the saw fan is a whole bunch of tv screens displaying slide after slide of Saw VI! Picture after picutre! Spoiler after spoiler! There is however a button on the chair the saw fan can push that has 60 volts of electricity that will shock the mess out of him/her and then unlcok him/her fom that uncomfortable chair and let them escape before they see another spoiler! If the saw fan chooses not to electricute themself and just remains in the chair then they will just have to sit there and watch slides of the whole hour or 2 of the movie in that uncomfortable harsh chair 3 times in a row!

PS: the slides are very low quality too so this is indeed a horrible way to see Saw VI

Sit through or Fry make your choice! LOL

flairmonkey
10-28-2009, 09:57 AM
Uh.... maybe a trap that centers around a guy getting his face ripped off, or maybe a trap with, and bare with me here, a guy with a very small key is his bloodstream and he has to guess correctly what part of his body it's flowing through via clues from Jigsaw and cut himself open to find it. Idk if it's possible but it sounds kinda cool

flairmonkey
10-28-2009, 10:00 AM
The Sawgasm trap lolz

A super saw fan who tries to avoid every possible spoiler so he/she can enjoy the movie on October 23rd finds themself strapped in an extremely uncomfortable chair! A chair so uncomfortable that after 5 minutes your butt is very very sore! Around the saw fan is a whole bunch of tv screens displaying slide after slide of Saw VI! Picture after picutre! Spoiler after spoiler! There is however a button on the chair the saw fan can push that has 60 volts of electricity that will shock the mess out of him/her and then unlcok him/her fom that uncomfortable chair and let them escape before they see another spoiler! If the saw fan chooses not to electricute themself and just remains in the chair then they will just have to sit there and watch slides of the whole hour or 2 of the movie in that uncomfortable harsh chair 3 times in a row!

PS: the slides are very low quality too so this is indeed a horrible way to see Saw VI

Sit through or Fry make your choice! LOL

Orrrr close your eyes!